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@Scrubicius

"Also don’t forget we have lost one 🐉! 🙈"

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"As it’s the first console title in a while, we revisited the Puzzle Bobble series and took a look a fresh look at what makes the game what it is."

"The first thing that comes to mind is the game system that defined the bubble shooter genre, but we also believe that the characters of Bub and Bob are essential to the game. Furthermore, we thought that, since there’s a four-player mode this time, we should also the story mode available for four players too, so we introduced Peb and Pab."

@Gerald

"you gotta be kidding me?"

Answer: no.

@Gerald

"Tighter than a Duck’s …."

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https://archive.org/download/nintendo-power-issue-128 :

"The item you have requested has a problem with one or more of the metadata files that describe it, which prevents us from displaying this page.

Items may be taken down for various reasons, including by decision of the uploader or due to a violation of our Terms of Use."

@Coalescence

"Cool as that is, I just can't read magazines in electronic format."

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@PewnyPL

"You know what guys? Screw you for this headline. Some people here actually watch the show and want to avoid spoilers for an upcoming episode...
What's next, you guys are gonna post the leaked final evolutions of Scarlet and Violet starters?"

(suggestion: no insulting (or any form of rudeness))

"It's not even fun to make fun of Sticker Star. It just feels sad, like laughing at a kid who just dropped their ice cream. Now I'm sad."

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It's not even fun to make fun of Sticker Star. It just feels sad, like laughing at a kid who just dropped his or her ice cream. Now I'm sad.

@jump

"Why is a young Chevy Chase a ref on the Mike Tyson's Punch-Out box?"

"Chevy Chase"?

"After the below article went live, it came to our attention that the data supplied by Nintendo might actually be more inaccurate than we'd initially believed. As pointed out by Colm Larkin over on Twitter (and indeed by a few of our own clever community members), the sharp spike at the twenty two year-old section might actually be due to a number of users simply selecting a birth year of 2000, either out of sheer laziness or a weird way to cheat the system."

(note: a suggestion to hear a certain recording of audio at this World Wide Web address (specifically the part of it between these points of its length: 25:22 - 34:17): https://www.npr.org/2022/01/27/1076168476/whodunit-at-the-afterparty-plus-the-lie-of-laziness">https://www.npr.org/2022/01/27/1076168476/whodunit-at-the-afterparty-plus-the-lie-of-laziness )

"It made excellent use of the Wii Remote, allowing playered to shine a torch in whichever direction they saw fit, making for a surprisingly immersive experience."

"There are hints of some buildings in the background, along with an overall look of decay that looks pretty darn gnarly."

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It made excellent use of the Wii Remote, allowing any player to shine a torch in any direction suitable to the player, making for a surprisingly immersive experience.

There are hints of some buildings in the background, along with an overall look of decay that looks very gnarly.

(suggestion: check spellings of this article)

@belmont

"I don't think I will renew next month but mostly because I don't have time to play online atm."

"atm."?

"Let us know in the polls below, and leave a comment with your thoughts. You know, if you like."

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You could let us know in the polls section and the comments section below.

@Jackpaza0508

"sorry, accidentally used a British word lmao (a minger is an ugly person or thing)"

"lmao"?

@Jackpaza0508

"The japanese one is a bit too crowded for me, I went for the European one because it’s less crowded and Mega Man isn’t a minger like on the US box art"

"minger"?

"Save up to 80% on Ubisoft Games With The Ubisoft Store’s Autumn Sale" (article):

https://news.ubisoft.com/en-us/article/5JISoyxnPjFs4jtHpFWO89/save-up-to-80-on-ubisoft-games-with-the-ubisoft-stores-autumn-sale

@russell-marlow

"It's been nearly forever since I heard there was an alleged Crash game 'rumored' to be coming yet Beenox kept teasing us with so many red herrings that I'm really starting to get annoyed.

But if there's a new Crash 5 or similar game in the works, hopefully I can get to still play as my big bazinga bandicoot waifu, Tawna."

"big bazinga bandicoot waifu"?

@Ooyah

"Wish you'd stop doing this. It's disrespectful to the original writers, and your suggestions really aren't any better than what was originally written."

(note: no disrespect was intended)

@Andy_Witmyer

"What was wrong with the original text?"

(answer: certain parts of it found to had been unpleasant and unclassy)

"For a teaser, we got a surprisingly good look at what is in store for us come April 7th, 2023, and if we're being honest, we were pretty darn impressed."

(suggestion of a different version of this part of this article: For a teaser, we got a surprisingly good look at what is in store for us come April 7th, 2023, and if we're being honest, we were impressed.)

(suggestion for editing this article: no using the words "their" and "they" as singular pronouns in this article)

@Snatcher

"I’m actually really excited for it! I’m not too worried about Mario’s voice, but we had the Mario tv show and that voice was different as different can be, so. I’m sure i will enjoy it ether way."

"Mario tv show"?
"voice"?

"Once again, this teaser trailer will air exclusively to New York Comic Con attendees on 6th October at 4pm EST."

"air"?

"Speaking to IGN to promote Bandai Namco's next-gen fighter Tekken 8, director Katsuhiro Harada was asked about what it was like to work with Sakurai on Kazuya, and summed up by saying he's "probably" the only one who can "properly" make the series, due to his deep understanding of different IPs."

https://www.imdb.com/find?q=Sakurai&s=nm&ref_=fn_al_nm_mr :

"Displaying 200 results for 'Sakurai'

Search category: All Names"

@RushDawg

"They being the review’s author, Tom Massey."

(some alternative forms of language for referencing this "author": "He" and "he")

(suggestions of different options for the poll on this page)

Yes.
No.

@RushDawg

"Did this reviewer actually test the online play?

They say that it 'works like a charm' but a lot of people have been complaining about the game becoming unplayable with more than 2 players online. Complaints about the online are all over the internet, across all versions."

"They"?

@wanderwonder

"it's been 84 years..."

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"Nintendo has finally announced real title for the game formerly known as The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild 2 — say hello to The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, launching on 12th May 2023."

(suggestion of a different version of this part of this article: Nintendo has an authorized title for the game formerly known as The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild 2 (The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom, launching 12th May 2023))

"While single-player DLC will no longer be available to download for several games on PC, on console, players will still be able to download and play them after 1st October 2022."

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While single-player DLC will no longer be available to download for several PC and console games by the end of 1st October 2022, players will still be able to download them before then and still be able to play them afterwards.

"The Virtual Console service no longer exists,"?

@Banjo-

"Mine is still connected to the TV as well because it can play Wii U, Wii and GameCube games natively plus the Virtual Console games and a few scene releases such as Ocarina of Time PC port, the remaster that Nintendon't do and that runs at 60fps in a decent resolution."

"natively"?
"Nintendon't"?

@Strumpan

"Also, with Nintendon't making it able to play Gamecube games natively, the Wii U has a fantastic library over the three generations it covers."

"Nintendon't"?
"natively"?

@PigmaskFan

"My toes! My toes!"?

https://www.commonsensemedia.org/game-reviews/we-are-ofk:

"Language

Profanity is featured quite heavily throughout the story, with the most prominent being 'f—k.' "

https://www.commonsensemedia.org/game-reviews/we-are-ofk:

"Language

Profanity is featured quite heavily throughout the story, with the most prominent being 'f—k.' "

https://www.commonsensemedia.org/game-reviews/we-are-ofk:

"Language

Profanity is featured quite heavily throughout the story, with the most prominent being 'f—k.' "

https://www.commonsensemedia.org/game-reviews/we-are-ofk:

"Language

Profanity is featured quite heavily throughout the story, with the most prominent being 'f—k.' "

https://www.commonsensemedia.org/game-reviews/we-are-ofk:

"Language

Profanity is featured quite heavily throughout the story, with the most prominent being 'f—k.' "

@Kirby_Girl

"@KryptoniteKrunch I agree! I never made the connection before even though Kirby's Dreamland is my first ever Kirby game but that hit stop he put in Kirby, he also put in Smash Brothers and it is a cool effect and seen in some other games as well.

I'm excited for any old Kirby dev knowledge!"

"hit stop"?

"All this, combined with another 20 or so hidden ‘flashback’ levels, means there’s a hell of a lot to get through here before you can consider this one 100% complete."

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All this, combined with another 20 or so hidden ‘flashback’ levels, means there's a lot to go through here before you can consider this one 100% complete.

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"The Sonic Lost World DLC puts the blue hedgehog in the worlds of NiGHTS Into Dreams, The Legend of Zelda series, and Yoshi's Island. Sadly, the NiGHTS word is only available in the Deadly Six Bonus Edition (available only as a pre-order bonus) and the PC version of the game, but the other two are still worth checking out. In fact, Sonic running around the open world landscape of Hyrule is the closest we'll get to checking out Sonic Frontiers before it comes out..."

@acNewUpdates

(an alternative version of the part of the article on this page involving the word "their" (specifically a version without it): Back in April, Nintendo of America was named alongside contracting firm Aston Carter in a National Labor Relations Board filing, where an "unnamed worker" claimed to have had been violated with regards to having had a legally protected right to unionise.)

"Back in April, Nintendo of America was named alongside contracting firm Aston Carter in a National Labor Relations Board filing, where an 'unnamed worker' claimed their legally protected right to unionise was violated."

"their"?

"You then select the boxer for player two and have the second player hold down the 'B' and 'Y' buttons on their controller until the match begins."

(suggestion of a different version of this part of this article: You then select the boxer for player two and have the second player hold down the 'B' and 'Y' buttons on the controller for that player until the match begins.)

@Serpenterror

"Everything on this one should had been included on the first one."

"first one"?

@IceClimbersMain

"Playing MK8 on my Wii U before it bricked, one of the things I remember the most gameplay-wise was how quickly the items respawned compared to Wii. If they're even quicker now, why not just make them... not disappear?"

"bricked"?

@Kochambra

"I'd rather have my perfectly functional physical copy when/if Nintendo decides to shut down all Switch online services, including game and update downloads. To each their own."

" 'Each' - Singular or Plural?" (article):

https://www.grammar.com/each-singular-or-plural/

"You might be thinking 'who watches YouTube and Crunchyroll on the Wii U in 2022?', but the Wii U app for Crunchyroll was known to be add-free for a time."

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(note #2: a suggestion for not using an article similar to this one in the future to guess a thought)