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Rhansley64

Hey Guys yeah i'l bet most of you know by now i write a blog for a topic simple because i can't hold back of what i'm thinking i can't simply a sentence no i need a really big one to explain stuff i made a few topic's here and especially topic's fighting arguments against third parties and at the same time appreciate but to be honest i could have made blog's after blog about piracy but i won't do that for two simple reason: 1 Most statement's go uncheck especially long ones like mine and 2 Some of you might be pirates yourself i'm not saying you (depending who read this i mean i was just a guest myself before joining) are but i always think off the consequences before writhing something (especially to avoid conflict) anyway i'm getting of topic like always so here's several examples of some of my topic's will be (maybe).

(Note: i am not this guy but my blog has something similar plus i'm also like to talk about trouble when our industry or something to do with video games are in trouble or top something or something fun.)

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Adam

I just came across this amazing article I thought you'd be interested in. I think it could really improve what is already some amazing writing of yours. It's really influenced my own writing, and I'd love to see how it affects yours.

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OldBoy

LOL

What's this bit for again?

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@Rhansley64

Your sentences are a bit long and your text becomes cluttered! sorry!

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V8_Ninja

I think my head grammatically exploded from reading that paragraph.

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weirdadam wrote:

I just came across this amazing article I thought you'd be interested in. I think it could really improve what is already some amazing writing of yours. It's really influenced my own writing, and I'd love to see how it affects yours.

Post of the day.

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Ristar42

That video guy is very lucid, though my sometimes short attention span made me only watch about two minutes. I did like the visual puns and reference to Scott Pilgrim...

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Rhansley64

Sorry for the butchering, but sometimes in order to improve writing one most write a lot.

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Linkuini

Adam's a bit blunt, here, but he's completely right. Even if you have to write something long (and that's great if you ask me), punctuation alone tends to make it less tiring to read through. After that, you can try separating text into individual paragraphs and indenting them. That's really the most I can say to you at this point; you can think of constructing concise theses and efficient word economy after you get the basics down.

Of course, knowing the internet, there are plenty of places where nobody's likely to get on your case for typing i instead of I, but if you want to write up a serious argument (even about the game industry), the ability to put together coherent and well-organized thoughts tends to lend more than a little authority to your position.

Now, compare...

Adams a bit blunt but yeah he's right even if you write something long (and thats good by the way) its easier to read if you have better punctuation also it helps to write multiple paragraphs instead of a huge one then you can talk about writing only the important stuff to save space but first you should have better basic grammar unless you just want to post little stuff on a forum then you can type something barely readable if you want but that sorta makes you sound like an idiot if you're trying to seriously debate something lol.

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RandomWiiPlayer

Um.... What?

The Game.

Is it after 9PM EST? You should probably ignore the above post.

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