I sent the second file to Terranigma last weekend. Anyone else ready for/wanting the next file in their book? Please remind which one (fantasy/Pierre) you are reading so I don't have to go back through here to see. Thanks everyone!
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Awesome, you're really chugging along and I appreciate it. Book1 has 12 chapters, book2 has 14 and book3 has 18 if you are interested in reading the whole thing (given enough time of course!).
I'm Currently working on: editing book3 (second edit) and writing book5 for NaNoWriMo (7k words in, need to up the pace.)
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
No, it stands for National Novel Writing Month,a November event where you try to write a 50k(+) word novel in 30 days. The drama i think is Pierre (book4) and I'm working on a fantasy/romance now for said event (book5.) I'll send Part3 to you shortly. (Chapters 7-9) Please email or post here with your thoughts on part2 though. Thanks!
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Okay, I sent you the third file. I do agree that the character development in book1 is a little shallow or forced, and hopefully (if you choose to keep reading the trilogy) you will see how I improved over the 4 years of writing it.)
For those who are interested, I will let people read my 5th book starting in December.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
UPDATE: I'm writing book5 for NaNoWriMo. So far I'm on schedule, just hitting 30k yesterday. I'd recommend this writing program to anyone mildly interested when it rears its ugly yet helpful head each November.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I actually completely forgot about this, but I have managed to finish the first chapter. Interesting character...
Sean Aaron ~ "The secret is out: I'm really an American cat-girl." Q: How many physicists does it take to change a light bulb? A: Two, one to hold the light bulb, the other to rotate the universe.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I'm not sure if I ever sent it to you, Shingi. :S As to anyone else: anyone ready for the next part?
My own update: I'm currently 85-90% done with Book5. It will become available to read through here in January.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Very nice. If you could just give me some overall thoughts on book1, pros and cons either here or in that thread, then I will send your the first 1/4 of book2!
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Thanks for the criticism. Character development is definately something I got better at as I continued, and I hope that shows. As for the universe, just about the entire continent is explored by the end of the trilogy, so I hope that is what you meant. A wide variety of people and places will be shown so maybe that will give that sense of reality and setting you're craving. I'll be sending book 2, part 1 to you right after I post this.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I know it's been the holiday season and everyone's been playing their shiny new games (myself included for 4-6 hours a day) but I just wanted to see if anyone had gotten any farther? Thanks.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Coolness. Possible choices are: Demon-Hunters Fantasy novel 1 of 3 (completed trilogy) Pierre (school comedy/dark satire, unfinished) The Elf (modern fantasy, you have to wait a lil bit until I get around to writing the last 5,000 words)
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I'm often slow to get round to things, which is why it often takes me a week to read the parts.
Believe me, you're doing much better than anyone else on here. (hint hint.)
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Coolness. Possible choices are: Demon-Hunters Fantasy novel 1 of 3 (completed trilogy) Pierre (school comedy/dark satire, unfinished) The Elf (modern fantasy, you have to wait a lil bit until I get around to writing the last 5,000 words)
You can send me the completed stuff -- but if you want criticism on the unfinished stuff, just send me the completed chapters of those.
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Sent the first parts to both Ramandus and iSkane. Thanks for your help and enjoy!
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
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