Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

@ZeroX I'm not good at catching elusive mistakes but let me post what I can:

He was different from other people. Ponies instad of people is better I think.

Are they trying to rid of her so I may never regain my memories? I have to stop them for Pinkie's sake. She's the only bridge between my past and present!
Maybe get rid instead of rid, and I think this three sentences should be on italics.

*"-Girls, Twilight said she found him.
-Um... Him?
-Yeah. Don't ya remember? Tha' stallion who saved our lives!
-Wait, you mean...
-Yes! Isn't it fabulous? Now girls, shall we rejoice in a bottle of champagne?
-No thanks. I...can't. Remember? Our scars?*
I have no idea who is talking here, not even how many. If it's on propouse because you don't want the reader to know who is talking, at least please explain how many ponies are there. I as a reader would appreciate it.

Please, please , please don't refer to our six mares as the "mane 6", they are not called that in their world, thus that completely takes you out of it. At least say "Main six"

Remember the next is just my opinion, k?

You my friend sometimes have cases of too much telling, too little showing. It's hard to explain and long so here is the Editor's Omnibus directly from EQD. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WMMs8H-GpFIXPsQeC0RNu8V-C...
Go read Show vs. Tell, it's an eye opener.

Two OC Alicorns more powerful that the Alicorn sisters? I didn't understand how is that possible, so they look like Mary Sues imo. I hope you explain it in later chapters, just not put them there and asume everyone will accept it.

This story goes too fast for my tastes, I really can't feel anything. Yeah the mane 6 and Celestia are hurt inside and silly Horus is totally screwed, but I don't feel it. I actually dislike your OC he reminds me of Kratos... I hate Kratos. I have to admit that by now, I know I don't like your story, sorry . Nothing personal, is just not my thing, I'm sure many people will like it. You fixed mistakes already. Keep working, it is getting better. Also, I can still read it if you want an objective opinion.

Edit: Dark theme? Not sure what you mean. The "war" against Discord? As I say before I don't feel it, is like when they tell you in the news there is some war far away and you don't actually have feelings about it.

Oh, shoot! I've nearly forgot to post my bad fan fic recommendation! Wait, let me look for it...

@Aqueous Thank you for the praise once more, but Eternal is not a romance, belive me it's not. Maybe the first chapters make it look like that, but is much more. It is emotional though, but so is my story. I saw your post, and just send you a swapnote to thank you for it. Sorry if I sounded harsh before, I just wanted to be sure you did like it all, story wise.

@SquiggleTail Hey there, yay bad fanfic... wait...

I read you already have some of your story written down? I'd like to read it. So when I have time to write again, I already have a good idea of what'ts going on. Can I? Where is it?

@Everypony I probably won't write on my fanfic as often, seeing the deviance of th plot and it's speed. I need more time for myself to work on the "Project Rising (an original title)"

_Okay...
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@Twilight_Crow - Ah, sorry. I've been catching up with people, so I'll go check my swapnote soon.
Ah, don't worry, I'll be honest about what I read but don't worry about it, check if you need too.
As for Squiggles story, I put a paragraph up, but I need to actually start getting into the back story

@SquiggleTail's (Bad) Fan Fic Pick of the Week
Name: The Trolling of Equestria
Author: Asianpersuasion1 (Joshua Schweitzer)
Link: http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7612693/1/
Description: When Fishdeguy stumbles across a conveniently placed crystal he and his friends are taking to the magical land of Equestria
Review: Oh, boy, this one's pretty bad... It's almost as bad as "Forever in Black", in terms of story and dialouge. It is, however, readable, since the spelling is alright; You can still understand what the characters are saying, although, at times, you'll find yourself reading a sentence more than once. The premise is pretty good, although, the execution is poor. The characters are highly unlikeable and they will make you want to punch the author in the face.
All in all, this fan fiction finds a way to do everything wrong in the most annoying way possible. 8 Buckets o' Puke out of 10.

I BUCKIN' NEED THIS

I thought today's episode was pretty good. I mean, Pinkiesising, felt, and awesome welcome wagons, what's not to like?
I thought the song was okay. It was good in the beginning, but I was annoyed by its length.

@Everypony, Next Week, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic moves to 1:00 P.M. Eastern Standard Time!

That means:
Central Standard Time: 12:00 P.M
Mountain Standard Time: 11: 00 A.M.
Pacific Standard Time: 10:00 A.M
Alaskan Standard Time: 9:00 A.M.
Hawaiian Standard Time: 8:00 A.M.

Finally, I can sleep in.

So I was playing Skyward Sword earlier today, without even knowing it was Saturday until someone reminded me. I mean, I can play Zelda whenever I want to, but Ponies only come once a week, and I almost neglected them. Am I a bad person?

I knew something epic was gonna happen at the beginning, and I was right; it was that song, and don't even get me started on how three more made it into this episode.

Shipping is definitely canon.

@Everypony Hey i'll RP in Batmare and who should Braeburn be?
Also this weeks episode of Pinkie Pie was great.

Goodnight everypony.

@Tare I just saw your video, and the resemblance between today's song and that are pretty close. Interesting find.

@SupremeRulerofBlaBla Another bad fanfic, I don't know if I should even read it. I may take a look. A closer look at the chocolate in question...... It looks even better than before, I still wouldn't eat it. What Ponies moving to a new time. How is that even possible.

@Aqueous I missed your comments, glad to see you post again.

@Twilight_Crow I wouldn't change any of your story. It's perfect the way it is. I did find some grammar errors and spelling, but as I said nothing big.

@ZeroX Your starting on another project. Hope you do well with it.

@TeeJay Lol. Poor Fluttershy.

@Destroyer64 The song did get a little long towards the end, but I didn't mind.

@Ultra128 I almost forgot about Saturday being pony day, but then I checked the thread yesterday and saw FluttershyGuy say it was tomorrow. I would have figured it out sooner or later, but he helped me remember.

@Braeburn01 Hello again.

I may not be around that often this next week, because I'm going to Australia In just over a week (the 27th to be exact). I need to spend most of my time to try to get ready to go, and finish off different things. I may make a post a day, but that would be it for me till I get there.
Good night everypony.

So...if i RP Rainbow Dash as nightwing, does that mean i RP Robin first?

this is one of the stories i wanted to parody because the main character is a recoler of Fluttershy, yet its a stallion, and it has a lot of useless paragraphs...
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9350/1/Different/Prologue

@Everypony I'm also going to stay RP as Braeburn.

@CorporalPegasus, No, you are Nightwing, this means that you are Dick Grayson, the first Robin. Dick Grayson quit being Robin, and became Nightwing. Grayson was replaced by Jason Todd as the second Robin. After (SPOILER) Jason Todd dies, he is replaced by Tim Drake. Also, after Superboy-Prime alters the Paradise reality, he comes back as the Red Hood. After Tim Drake grows up, he turns into the Red Robin. He is briefly replaced by his girlfriend, Stephanie Brown. After she "died", then turned into the second Batgirl, then the Spoiler, she is replaced by Damian Wayne, Bruce Wayne's son.

So, according to @MasterGravenHeart's list, Applebloom would be Damian Wayne (Current Robin), Derpy would be Stephanie Brown (Fourth Robin, Second Batgirl, Current Spoiler), Scootaloo would be Tim Drake (Current Red Robin, third Robin), and Rainbow Dash would be Dick Grayson (Current Nightwing, first Robin). I would suggest that Braeburn should be Jason Todd (Current Red Hood/ second Robin).

@CorporalPegasus Interesting. I would like to see what you could do with it.

OH! And Discord should be Bat-Mite! And Winona should be Ace the Bat-Hound!

@CorporalPegasus, I think I just found next week's "(Bad) Fan Fic Pick of the Week".

I feel so silly I never thought of this until now. The Rainbow Dash set I got months ago comes with a TURTLE! When I bought it, it was some time before "May the Best Pet Win" aired (or was announced). I feel like a lame brain for not noticing and mentioning the foreshadowing of it before now! If I remember right, I got the RD set below before season 2 even started...

So, there may be hints to future FiM events in toys we get or, like me, you can look back and see that there was foreshadowing from a set!

@SquiggleTail
I may actually watch the show live now instead of taped! One thing I liked about new episodes on Saturday morning proper (which it still is some places) is that it harkened back to the olden days of Saturday cartoons, something that was a staple of my childhood (and I imagine many others). Saturday cartoons aren't the same now, and haven't been in years. Ah, the days of Winnie the Pooh, Captain N, Garfield & Friends, The Real Ghostbusters, Misadventures of Ed Grimley, etc... Why U pass me by, childhood?