Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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@Bimmy_and_Jimmy, Confound you, sit! How dare you make me shed manly tears!

If we are going to RP Batmare, I want to be Bat-Mite/Discord, but, I'm not sure if somepony has already taken Discord to RP.

@Revolverflare Nopony has taken Discord.

@SquiggleTail: JumpMad was claimed to be Discord, but I don't think he minds if you take his place.

@Bimmy_and_Jimmy: Aw. After reading that, I haven't felt the same since I read My Little Dashie.

@FluttershyGuy: Why is Rainbow Dash wearing a visor? And knee pads? And riding a Skooter? And has a basket and a turtle that isn't Tank? (What a weird forshadowing, though)
I never liked how they added all those all those accessories that the character usually isn't associated with. Except the turtle. Because that was just psychic semi-magic.

What's all this about Ponyfied bat character RPing? Not like I can join in or anything. I know nothing of the Batman universe. (Not really big on superheroes (Marvel and DC Comics and stuff like that) in general.)
EDIT: I really need to read My Little Dashie sometime. Too many references floating around the internet now.

Guys, I might just take down my fanfic and star over period. We'll see how it goes...

Why? I'm (and everyone else here) is loving it so far.

Not everyone likes it and I get complaints about how it's too fast. I've lost track of the original plot and it just goes downhill from there.

It's only a matter of time before it ends up on SquiggleTail's theater of horrible fanfics. I'll recycle the characters, but expect the plot to be different.

@ZeroX I still haven't read it all, but I don't think it should be taken down. But if you wan't to that's ok. It's your choice.

@SupremeRulerofBlaBla Applebloom as Damian. I really dislike that kid.

@ZeroX - Come on. Its good. If people think its too fast and you think so too. Just slow down the plot in your story. Don't remove it. I still need to catch up.

@Applejacklove - Thank you.

I love doing this,
http://my.deviantart.com/messages/#/d4q7jgb

@ZeroX,

PLEASE, DON'T TAKE IT DOWN!!! I still haven't read it! Also, I'm too darn nice to make fun of a friends work.

Today, i got one step closer to converting my rl friends into bronies. And they still dont know im a brony.
Succes kid.jpg

@ZeroX: Don't take it down! It's interesting, and I haven't read chapter 3 yet!

@CorporalPegasus: Nice! How do you do that? I'm only semi-successful in converting people into bronies.

I've converted one of my friends, though he won't admit it to anyone else.. I have already chosen my next victi- I mean brony-to-be.

I feel like this is a religious thing. Converting people... :/

We're not converting. We're making people's lives complete
And Rainbow Dash said to the Earth Ponies. "Let there be light!" and conjured up a Sonic Rainboom.

Now now now, @Teejay Brony isn't a religion. Its what you watch on television. Or internet. Its just that, when you want people to watch something wich has a girly and kiddy reputation as My Little Pony, you cant do it the useal way.

I've tried to use subliminal messages to brainwash my brother into joining our cult...

@Everypony I just feel like I need to speed the "intro" so Horus can have some "real" character development.

I'm soooooooo glad that they extended the due date for the stories by 24 hours. Now it won't seem so rushed.

Also, I totally forgot to tell you guys what happened yesterday.

So I ski race. Every now and then, we head to a ski club, do a spot of training, inspect the course, then one by one everyone goes down it.
And the point is to go very fast.
Everyone gets a bib with a number on it. So person with a bib of 1 goes first, 2 second, etc.
Now, our coaches give us a bib because they sort of decide when we go. Turns out by some strange human error, I wasn't on the bib list.
Eventually things got sorted out, but they needed a name. A name they'd announce when I was in the starting gate. A name that would show up on the time sheet.
So, basically; I told them my name was Big Mac.
I figured that was the only one that wasn't too strange/girly/odd.
So, as I was in the gate, the announcer proclaimed in a rather confused tone:
"Big...Mac...is now in the gate"
Thankfully, no one suspected anything, and most racers were conspiring with their respective teams, but I still thought it was awesome.

Ahh...

@ZeroX
The following is a rant that doesn't really follow any particular order. It's also blunt, though not unhelpful. It is meant to help you out.

I personally believe it's much better to display a mindset/demeanor through dialogue and actions. I read your fic and there's a lot of just telling. This happened then this happened then...etc. It doesn't feel overly engaging. It sort of jumps without clear distinction of what is going on.
From what I gather; this guy is a veteran of a war; he is really really powerful; he gets hurt a lot; Luna is evil; Pinkie was nearly killed and in a freezer.

Fantasy is tricky to do. As tempting as it, don't make your character have godly powers. If the point of suspense is to wonder if a character is going to survive an encounter with an enemy; not a lot of worrying takes place for a character with superpowers.
Also just saying there was a war, doesn't automatically add weight. Describing a scene from the war does though.

When people say you jump around too much, it means you're not giving enough detail to otherwise important things. You're showing us one thing, then moving to something else before telling what the other thing was.

Lastly, have the plot (important events, deaths and other whatnots) already planned out. If you have a completed story in your head, it's much easier to write it down.

/End rant