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Macaronius

Here's the redux of the original Scary Story Thread
I'll start...
In rural Wisconsin, there is an old abandoned park. Built in the 1920s, it served as the town’s gathering place for everyone.

That is, until a newly developed Train and Tunnel for Tots™ ride was installed in 1932. It was an innocent looking childish train, with one main (mechanized) head car, with three small trolleys pulled behind it. It went around some loops before going into a small tunnel.

But this is where the story gets weird. There were numerous cases of child deaths that year, all of them happening after the child rode on that train system. Some kids went missing in that short tunnel (about ten feet), and others went comatose after leaving. One, upon exiting, was found to be dead. Her dress was covered in what looked like small bloody handprints. Some killed themselves by scratching at their throats until they bled out, and one of them even killed another child before hanging herself with razor wire at the family’s farm.

The park was closed, and the town’s popularity as a tourist town plummeted.

Recently, a team of scientists were sent out to the park. They taped a video camera to the train, and put a new intern in with it, before sending it on its way onto the tracks.

When the train left the tunnel, it was empty, except for the camera.

The last ten seconds were nothing but static, save for the sound of children laughing.

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Mascotty

here is the story I told in chat (It's about a dream I had)
[12:16] MoFaJo: I was in a town filled with adobes EVERYWHERE, they looked all the same and were all lined up in rows/columns (Here is what one lookes like http://travel.mongabay.com/china/600/china_100-6860.JPG
[12:17] MoFaJo: but the doors and windows weren't there
[12:17] MoFaJo: like, they were, but there was no wood
[12:17] pikmaniac02: so basicaqlly stone boxes?
[12:17] MoFaJo: like in swbf2 in mos eisley
[12:17] pikmaniac02: *basically
[12:17] ProtoZone: Interesting...
[12:17] MoFaJo: yes pik
[12:17] MoFaJo: well...
[12:17] pikmaniac02: oh got it:D
[12:18] MoFaJo: I start walking through this totally deserted town
[12:18] MoFaJo: and I got to the edge and looked from right to left
[12:18] MoFaJo: there were adobes as far as the eye could see
[12:18] ProtoZone: So?
[12:18] MoFaJo: but, when I looked forward, there was a forest
[12:19] MoFaJo: and about 300 yards to the right was a bridge
[12:19] Roopa132: damn I didn't remember any dreams in months. I can't even remember the last dream I remembered
[12:19] MoFaJo: the only way to get the bridge was by going into one of the housed
[12:19] MoFaJo: houses*
[12:19] MoFaJo: and in side this adobe was a scarecrow
[12:20] MoFaJo: with a pumpkin head
[12:20] ProtoZone: So?
[12:20] MoFaJo: and it was pointed at me, then it kind of turned left to show me the bridge
[12:20] MoFaJo: lol SOOOOO
[12:20] pikmaniac02 shivers
[12:20] MoFaJo: I try look at the bridge and try taking a first step
[12:21] MoFaJo: and my feet become magnetically attatched to the bridge like OoT
[12:21] MoFaJo: lol
[12:21] ProtoZone: Awesome
[12:21] pikmaniac02: .....and?
[12:21] MoFaJo: and the part I'm standing on falls and swings to the other side
[12:22] MoFaJo: srry if this is too long
[12:22] MoFaJo:
[12:22] pikmaniac02: lol
[12:22] pikmaniac02: go on :3
[12:22] MoFaJo: so I'm walking up it (and remember, I was only FIVE when I had this dream)
[12:22] MoFaJo: and on the other side of the forest, was an open mall
[12:22] ProtoZone: lol
[12:23] MoFaJo: I went inside, and there were my dad and my sis
[12:23] MoFaJo: and a man that looked kinda looked like the bad guy from national treasure
[12:23] pikmaniac02: wtf?
[12:23] MoFaJo: well he started following us
[12:24] MoFaJo: lol, I know
[12:24] MoFaJo: and he grabs me, and pulls me away, and my dad and him were litterally having a tug o war contest over me
[12:24] MoFaJo: then my chest starts to rip
[12:24] ProtoZone: O_O
[12:24] pikmaniac02: pedophile much?
[12:25] pikmaniac02:
[12:25] MoFaJo: and blood spills
[12:25] MoFaJo: as well as my heart
[12:25] pikmaniac02 likes gore
[12:25] MoFaJo: and then the bad guy won and just took me away and strapped me to a wheel chair lol
[12:26] MoFaJo: and my chest was still open
[12:26] MoFaJo: and he layed me on a lab table
[12:26] pikmaniac02:
[12:26] pikmaniac02: O_O
[12:26] MoFaJo: then he put his hand inside my mouth and began to pry it open
[12:26] pikmaniac02: O_O
[12:26] SUPERZELDAMAN joined the conversation
[12:26] ProtoZone: lol
[12:26] MoFaJo: and then I just closed my eyes
[12:27] ProtoZone: This is strange
[12:27] MoFaJo: and I woke up
[12:27] pikmaniac02: abandon hope, all ye who enter
[12:27] MoFaJo: and there was szm, standing right above me <--(not true )

Mascotty

Xkhaoz

Okay, this one is kinda cheesy and made up, but ah well.

Back is 1997, there was a kid in a small town in Vermont called Jimmy. Jimmy loved everything Sega. Ecpecially Sonic. He just loved Sonic. One day, he got the game known as "Sonic R". He played it, and played it, and played it. One foggy night, his family went out, while Jimmy stayed home. When his family got home that night, Jimmy was no where to be found. He was gone. But strangely, there was a doll. It was a yellow fox with two tails and a red ruby hanging from it's head. They called it, "Tails Doll". The next day, the police came to investigate the dissapearence of Jimmy, but when they got there, blood was splattered on the walls, and the family was in a closet, nothing but bloody corpses. Right beside them, was the same doll, but there was no blood on it. The police took it as evidence. But the next day, everyone in the town was brutaly murdered. But in the middle of the town, was the Tails Doll, smiling.

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Macaronius

True stories are acceptable, but fiction is preferred.

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Reala

Here's a horror story so scary, it comes with a waring, "Warning this is a scary story", once upon a time Rea.. lets call the character Real hero or RH for short, RH was an artistic soul with mechanical eyes hiding merelly in bed rooms and bathrooms etc, innocently surveying humanity for art and science too really, very fascinating stuff but I digest, when one day some privacy invasion extremists had RH arrested, RH spent several months in jail because of these hippies, and had all art destroyed, pretty scary story isn't it.

Moral is hippies hate art and RH is totally cool, who ever that is

[Edited by Reala]

Reala

Min

@proto: Creepy
@Mo: Wierd
@Xk: Just plain Cheepy... (cheesy+creepy FYI)
@Reala: Quite.

[Edited by Min]

The most minlicious of them all.

Macaronius

In a nondescript rural corner of the American midwest, in a long row of units at one of the many dilapidated mini storage businesses that dot that dreary landscape, is a unit, Unit 232, with barely-noticable scratches in the concrete in front of the sliding door.

Upon closer inspection of Unit 232, the careful observer will note a few things: the frame around the door to the unit is dinged and bent up along its entire length, to the point that the door cannot be slid open even an inch; the door itself is curiously warped (some describe it as “pinched”) at the center, though not badly enough to see at first glance; the brown-tan paint covers up several much older layers that can be observed where chipping has occurred. An even more careful observer will discover that the entire row of units in which 232 is contained is of an older architectural style than the other rows, indicating that it alone has remianed in place possibly since the inception of the storage facility.

The owner, of course, has a story about Unit 232, although he doesn’t like to tell it. When he was much younger, someone rented the unit–he doesn’t recall who–and then disappeared after that, never paying the next month’s rent. Such things, the owner will say, happen often in his business, for all kinds of reasons, and so he and his boys clipped the flimsy lock from the unit along with several other unpaid lots a few weeks later, intending to sell its contents at blind auction and recoup some of their losses. Unfortunately, even with all three of them grunting and heaving at the door, it would not lift at all. Angry, the owner hired out some heavy machinery to tear the door down instead.

Behind the door, the owner says, was nothing but a solid wall of dull steel. The small backhoe tore the flimsy aluminum door out easily, but barely made a scratch in the metal. Exploratory cuttings elsewhere around the unit revealed that the same metal pressed against every wall. Whatever it was, it seemed practically bolted into the concrrete.

The next revelation was the discovery of a large, plain keyhole set into the block–which, the owner supposes, must actually have something else inside of it–on the side that faced the back of the unit. A locksmith was hired to examine the keyhole, but the moment he began feeling out the hole with his turning tools, he fainted clean away. When he came to an hour or so later, he was in such bad shape that his eyes would not focus and his tongue would not form words, and he was eventually committed to the county mental health ward (back when it was still called an asylum, the owner will say) where he managed to hang himself with a towel a few months later.

Having had quite enough of these goings-on, the owner called in a full-scale demolition service to take out the unit with a bulldozer, but when the vehicle arrived, the engine cut out and could not be started again until it had been towed some miles away. Spooked because of the story about the locksmith, which caused a small local media sensation at the time, the driver decided against trying a second time, and when word got round to the other heavy equipment companies in the area, the owner was left with no one to try and finish the job.

Naturally, he will say, he decided to rent the equipment and have one of his employees take care of it for him instead. But this is where he trails off, every time, and if you press him for the story of that worker, he will say nothing, only staring off out the window of his office as though you are not there at all. In the end, he will say, clearing his throat, he carefully re-paneled the walls, attached a new door, welded it in place and banged up the frame as an added precaution. The “pinching” at the center of the door, he will tell you, seems to happen on its own, but he has learned to stop asking questions about whatever is locked up inside that huge steel box.

Of course, every lock has a key somewhere in the world that fits it. What is inside the cube in Unit 232? Whoever has the key might know; more likely it has been passed along from attic to attic and rummage
sale to antique shop so many times that whoever has it has no idea what it is for. Check your garage, basement, attic or junk drawers: almost everyone has a few big, old keys lying in a dark corner somewhere that he or she cannot recall the purpose of. Perhaps one of yours fits the lock hidden inside Unit 232….

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Macaronius

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Mascotty

Two brothers used to play videogames a LOT like most boys do. The older brother was short on cash but, had JUST enough money to buy only ONE copy of pokemon silver. So he did. He opened the box and found a silver game cart. The older brother held the game cart in his hand and said, "hmph that's strange, there's no label on it". He shrugged at this and put the game in anyway. The older brother had LOADS of fun playing it. "When can I play my mario game on there?" asked the little brother. "Soon! after I'm done with this one part" said the older brother. After a long enough time, the younger brother went to his mom. "Mommy, can u tell him to share with me!" he whined. "Let your little brother play. It's his turn!" demanded the mom. "Fine! here's your stupid system!" said the older brother while handing his little brother the game. The younger brother put his mario game in the system. He put the game in and played for hours and hours. The next day, the younger brother was walking around his house, playing his mario game while his mother was out grocery shopping. Then he tripped over something. he screamed a little then looked up. He turned around and saw that his older brother was laying there, face down on the ground. "What are you doing? That really hurt!" yelled the younger brother. The older brother didn't respond. He walked over to his older brother. The older brother slowly turned his head towards his younger sibling. The younger brother screamed so loud it could be heard all throughout the neighborhood. When the mother came home, she saw her two sons laying on the floor facedown right next to eachother. The detective investigating the scene happened to be an avid game lover. So he felt a strange urge to put in the police report that the younger boy had a system in his right hand when died. Inside the system...............was a silver game cart........with no label......

BEFORE YOU READ PROTO'S POST BELOW: here is a vid that has an audio recording of the forum disscusion
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVS4Agu5LTg

[Edited by Mascotty]

Mascotty

LordJumpMad

Creepy.....o.o

For you, the day LordJumpMad graced your threads, was the most important day of your life. But for me, it was Tuesday.
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Macaronius

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Min

Candle Cove story = One of the creepiest things I've ever read

The most minlicious of them all.

Macaronius

Sorry Min, I didn't realize.

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
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SonicMaster

I didn't find Candle Cove terribly creepy, but I did find the ending very good.

SonicMaster

Kaeobais

ProtoZone wrote:

What you've all been waiting for, the Candle Cove story!

NetNostalgia Forum - Television (local)

Blah blah blah blah blah not gonna post the entire story again cause it'll flood the page blah blah blah this story is good blah blah

I do like this story, but I've always had one question, one burning plot hole that just never made sense to me ... WHO WAS THE PHONE!?

[Edited by Kaeobais]

The best strategy in the game: go up stairs and pause balls.

Macaronius

Shadx wrote:

ProtoZone wrote:

What you've all been waiting for, the Candle Cove story!

NetNostalgia Forum - Television (local)

Blah blah blah blah blah not gonna post the entire story again cause it'll flood the page blah blah blah this story is good blah blah

I do like this story, but I've always had one question, one burning plot hole that just never made sense to me ... WHO WAS THE PHONE!?

A homeless man is sitting on a park bench. You are jogging.
As you jog up to him, he holds his hand out and asks for change, you jog on past, pretending that you can’t hear him over your iPod.

Feeling guilty, you stop. You reach into the pocket of your running shorts for a couple of bucks you were saving for a bottle of water. You turn around to jog back to the homeless man.

He is already standing right behind you. The park is suddenly abandoned. His eyes are wriggling masses of wasp larvae, he outstretches his arms, each which are 5 feet in length. His mouth opens inexplicably wide, his lower jaw touching his sternum. The only sound he emits from his gaping mouth is a dial tone.

Before he pulls you into the black cavernous throat of his, you have time to scream,

“Oh god. You were phone!"

So now you know.

[Edited by Macaronius]

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Macaronius

Anyone who doesn't get the "WHO WAS PHONE" statement, allow me to explain.

"So ur with ur honey and yur making out wen the phone rigns. U anser it n the vioce is “wut r u doing wit my daughter?” U tell ur girl n she say “my dad is ded”. THEN WHO WAS PHONE?"

I have completed my explanation |:3
It was a moronic story on /x/ forums that gradually became a meme.

[Edited by Macaronius]

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Macaronius

A man and woman walked out of the bank, hand in hand. This might be a normal thing for anyone, maybe even you. But not for her.

The man made a typical, throwaway remark about their lunch plans. Under usual circumstances, this would just be interpreted as a feeble attempt to incite lightheartedness into the conversation. But not for her.

With a quick, agile movement, the woman, his wife, picked up a slab of concrete by the sidewalk and, with great aim, hit two doves perched on a low-hanging branch. They fell, like two pathetic white balloons. As soon as they hit the ground, his wife beat them to a pulp-she could see that they were still breathing. And her husband knew that he messed up again.

Some passerby began to stare openly at the horrible sight of two bashed birds.

“Linda!” Her husband yelled. “Stop it!”

“I thought we were going to kill two birds with one stone?” She replied, in a voice of unnatural calm. Her face gazed up at him from the ground, stoic and rigid, like some dread mask.

…………………………………………………………………………………………..

She had a certain….well, mental illness is a bit of a euphemism. Let’s just say she had a disability. A serious and rare one. Linda could not understand the difference between jokes and imperatives. She took every figure of speech she heard seriously, and was often compelled to make whatever it was into an actuality. Her husband recalled, one point, when she nearly pushed him out the window, when, in light of the recent resignation of his business partner, he remarked that he was in fact flying solo. Linda wasn’t always dangerous, though. Sometimes, he’d go home only to find her giggling like a little girl at the sight of milk on the floor. Or maybe even staring out windows during rainy evenings to see whether any cats and/or dogs were to be found falling from the sky. But then came the times when she would get harmful. Only last month, the pediatrician living in the apartment next to theirs got pelted with apples and other fruits. Poor woman nearly tripped down the stairs. This other time, an event which still scared him up to now, she shoved in his hands a bit of her bloody scalp, saying it was a piece of her mind. She had to wear a bonnet whenever she had to get out of the house after that. In spite of all this strange and violent behavior, he still loved his wife very much and could not bear to send her away to a mental hospital.

His mistake.

He became very careful around what she would see or hear coming from anybody since the episode with the birds. Much to his joy, a year and a half passed without much incident, and their firstborn child was soon to come. It was good, since the coming of a baby took their minds off whatever financial problems they had.

He was away when it happened. After he heard that child was born, he rushed back home.

As soon as he stepped through that door, he knew something was wrong. His wife was calling him from the kitchen. In her arms was the son he could never know.

In the light of their kitchen, lain on the table, were the remains of the baby, their baby. Its mouth was stretched open to such a degree that it split open, the underside of its jaws seen. It reminded him of a tear in cloth, the seams not made of fabric but of flesh. What little blood the baby had to spare was everywhere. In response to his child’s grotesquely expanded mouth, his father’s jaw fell open in surprise and terror and disgust, threatening to do the same. A scream tried to come out, but it did not.

Forcibly thrust into the gaping hole that was a baby’s mouth, was his wife’s forearm. She seemed to be trying to claw something out of the-

As soon as his wife spotted him, she turned in his direction, bloody baby still stuck on her arm.

“You have to help me! The doctor said he was born with a silver spoon in his mouth!”

[Edited by theblackdragon]

*Hunt the Hare and turn her down the rocky road
all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Macaronius

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all the way to Dublin, Whack follol de rah!*

Xkhaoz

Okay, Proto. 19th post, FREAKING SCARY. And you need to censor the 18th post.
EDIT: Is 19th post real?

[Edited by Xkhaoz]

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