Topic: Pokemon creation (Fakemon) topic

This topic is for all your original Pokemon creations. Whether that is just a name, type, ability, and stats, or a full concept description with text, or a picture or drawing.

You can also do Mega-Pokemon if you like. If you'd like, you can rate and comment on other people's creations

Here's mine:
Benziper
Poison
Abilities:
1. Aroma- Opponent has a 30% chance of it's evasion dropping 2 stages after attacking it
2. Conjugate- Defense and Sp. Def stats and Atk and Sp. Atk stats switch when being attacked such that the higher defense stat matches the type of attack (physical or special) (switch prior to damage calculation)
Stats:
HP: 78
Atk: 70
Def: 50
Sp. Atk: 30
Sp. Def: 135
Spd: 122
BST: 485

Notable Moves:
Coil
Swords Dance
Gunk Shot
Sludge Wave
Iron Tail
Sucker Punch
Fire Blast
Shadow Ball
Psychic
Toxic
Spikes
Toxic Spikes

Appearance: A gray colored snake biting it's tail. In this shape, the designs on it's skin appear like a rupee (like from Zelda) with a circle inside.

Props if you get the basis on this one. And there is another reference in the stats.

Meh, heck I'll play along.

Smalasher
Stage 3 Evolution
Armored Shrimp Pokemon
Water/Fighting
Ability: Tough Claws

Dex Description:
This pokemon's jab is so fast and powerful, only it's own tail can take the hit unscratched. They live solitary lives threatening any intruders with their fearsome glare.

Hp: 70
Atk: 130
Def: 130
SpA: 65
SpD: 80
Spe: 105

Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 212.3 lbs.
Length: 3' 3" (Just cause..)

Movepool:
Focus Punch
Thunder Punch
Fire Punch
Drain Punch
Dynamic Punch
Power-Up punch
Shadow Punch
Sky Uppercut
Bullet Punch
Mach punch
Hammer Arm
Aqua Jet
Aqua Tail
WaterFall
Glare
Bug bite
Baton pass
Splash (lol)
Ice Punch
Toxic
CrabHammer
Withdraw
Crunch
Knock Off
Hone Claws
Substitute
Protect
Water Pulse
Hydro Pump
Giga Impact
Return
Poison Jab
X-scissor
Foresight
Agility
Shell Smash (Yeah now I made him broken.. )

Appearence: Hard to picture or describe an appearence.. but the general idea is basing it off of the Mantis Shrimp. I like clawitzer being a pistol shrimp, but I've always wanted a mantis shrimp based pokemon as well. It's body would be in a more curled position where it's tail is facing the opponent (acting as a shield) along with it's head hiding slightly behind it (Kinda like escavalier but sticking further out) facing the player with an aggressive look on it's face with large eyes with eyelids coving them halfway. (kinda like venipede's eyes on a narrow snout like head similar to heatmor's, but even more aggressive looking) It's 4 legs would look kinda like armaldo's arms in a similar position to scolipede's except the back pair would turn in the opposite direction to the front pair. It's tail would look very similar to milotic's but much larger, and wider as well as more crustecean like. It's arms would be on the side of it's body looking nearly identical to armaldo's but extend forward jabbing opponents similar to how breloom's arms spring out. Outer body color would generally be green with yellow eye pupils, and various parts of the tail being colored in different shades of blues and red. Inner body being black, Claws being red, with arms being the same green as the rest of the body. Legs being red as well.

Not bad, and a Mantis Shrimp SHOULD be broken.

That said, if the Oatmeal comic is anything to go by...
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/mantis_shrimp

I think it should be Water/Dark, and it's abilities should be Compound Eyes and Technician.
The former because it can see so many colors, and the latter because it attacks quickly and powerfully (as in powerful priority moves)

Oh, neat, I would've greatly appreciated this topic...back when I was 10. :T Is it okay if I link to some really neat ones I found?

F***, I'll do it anyways:

This one's stupid-looking, but I kinda believable.
This one's really cool looking.
I like these two as well.

I notice that everone who comes up with fake Pokemon are terrible when it comes to naming them, though...seriously, Scavicious? I almost threw up in my mouth trying to say that...and that's not even the worst one I found...

Water/dark wouldn't make too much sense since his best dark stab would be knock off. Consituring he's punching, and the majority of his movepool is fighting type, the fighting typing works well. Steel type was also a thought but other than bullet punch there isn't much reason for it. Technician would work for mach/bullet punch perhaps, but it doesn't boost his other attacks as well, compoundeyes wouldn't benefit him since he doesn't have low accuracy moves.

I'll try to make a picture of him sometime..

Also that comic is a bit off on them. I own Odontodactylus Scyllarus, and Neogonodactylus Wennerae, and along with research on them from the doc himself, they aren't 100% correct on their info. Most notability, I believe they can see only 12 colors instead of 16... and only the larger Odontodactylids and Gonodactylus Chiragra can chip glass.

I got more into it as I got more into competitive battling.

Anyway, yeah, fan names are horrible. Including mine. I only make names because I feel the creation is incomplete without it.

I'm curious about what @Octane thinks of my fakemon?

I was gonna say...Benziper? Is it supposed to be like a Seviper? I mean even the description sounds a lot like a Seviper...

Bah, I shouldn't make fun of it, though. I vaguely recall coming up with names for my fan-made Digimon that were so bad I basically threw out the drawings when I found them years later based solely on that...

Anyway, since no one's guessing, Benziper is based on the chemical compound Benzene. Benziper = Benzene+Viper

The concept is that August Kekule, the guy who came up with the structure for Benzene, apparently had a dream of a snake biting it's own tail, which gave him the idea for that structure.

...did he also dream of rupee-like designs with a circle in it and most of Seviper's moveset (as well as a lot of common TMs to give to Seviper)? :T

I got things to say about MegaBeedrill's Smalasher, too, but I'll save that for tomorrow when I can think better...

See the lower right representation. The best way I could describe the outer shape is rupee-like.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benzene#mediaviewer/File:Benzene...

Anyway, I'm not thinking the design is like Seviper. If the snake were just straight, the designs would appear as lines. But the idea is that it is biting it's tail, connecting the design from head to tail creating the design I referred to.

A few more explanations.
Aroma- Benzene is the most well known aromatic hydrocarbon
Conjugate- Benzene abnormally stable, because it's what's referred to as "conjugated", with every other bond being a double bond.

And it's HP is 78 because that's the molar mass of benzene.

One thing I tried to simplify was the name actually. Since Stomatopoda is split into two groups; (actually four but I'll save that education for a different forum..coughhatchetandspikearetwoextragroupsinolderspeciescough) spearers and smasher, and this one is mostly based on the smashing variation, I tried to make a name revolve around the smasher characteristic.. and the simpliest name I can think of was Smalasher that's easy to say, lasher and smasher are both fitting for the species, you see the point by now. Certainly easier than Clawitzer that I still have some difficulty pronouncing..

I think alot of people try too hard to come up with names. Benziper I see the origin to the name but like Caniswolf said, it sounds extremely similar to another pokemon. Maybe.. Serzene? Ser=serpent, Zene=Benzene? But that might sound too similar to the snivy line..

I'd say they're not trying hard enough, but then again, I wouldn't be surprised if Pokemon Company had a whole committee on naming pokemon, and if so, they deserve the big bucks big time...for the most part.

Mega Typhlosion:
Type: Fire
Ability: Tough Skin- Immunity to all non-volatile status ailments
Stats:
HP: 78
Atk: 104
Def: 78
Sp. Atk: 159
Sp. Def: 115
Spd: 100

Reasoning: Typhlosion is a honey badger, and honey badgers have thick skin that grants them immunity to snake toxins and the like. Also, since it's regular stats are the same as Charizard, it makes sense to make it's Mega stats the same too.

Immunity is an ability ya' know.

http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Immunity_(Ability)

Reguardless I think adaptability or flash fire might be better.

Yeah, but Immunity is more restrictive. I figured a mega of an awesome pokemon like Typhlosion should have a better ability. I think immunity to all status could be a really competitively dangerous ability anyway. Walls can no longer harm you with T-Wave and Toxic, and Mega Venusaur's sleep powder is no longer an issue.