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@Twilight_Crow Um, I know this is embarrassing, but How do I find your story.
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@Twilight_Crow - I've always read for pleasure first, not that it means much these days, as it's harder to get lost in the stories but your asking for a basic critique then just to see what works and what does not, I can do that, I'm guessing you do not want me to hold back? I'll let myself go then because normally I keep some thoughts to myself, as I don't wish to be rude. Also I just checked, that is a never before posted fan fic by you.
@SquiggleTail - I've got a couple of ideas of what it means or could mean...... Also as my laptop gave out, I can read things on the site but not comment for a while. What did I have to find to get emails on the 3DS again?
@Applejacklove - At worst I think it would be a week but I have a feeling tomorrow or monday, I'll be fine.
@Everypony - As I need to start sleeping better, good night
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OKAY! SO! I'M DONE! WHAT?!? YES! I'M DONE WITH EVERYTHING! (WEBSITE HAS ALSO BEEN UPDATED!) WELL, NOT EVERYTHING! BUT, HERE IT IS! I totally rushed this, due to the fact that I only had an hour and a half to finish...
So, here's the first of "SquiggleTail's Fan Fiction Theater"! Basically, every week, the very talented @Twilight_Crow posts a fan-fic that she thinks is great (well, they are always great). I'm basically going to do the opposite! I'm going to recommend horrible fan-fics! Why? So that all of you can learn from the mistakes of these writers.
... What can I say about this.... It's just... terrible... Trust me. Read it, though, as you will find yourself laughing at the various misspellings and plot holes. Basically, this is the story: Alta Hex Strife is an "emo" pony that nobody likes. So, after getting kicked out of her last town (for being an emo, duh), she decides to live in PonyVille. But, this isn't the PonyVille you all know and love... as everypony (the mane 6) are emo's that love Justin Biber and Katy Perry... eeyup....
... What can I say about this.... It's just... terrible... Trust me. Read it, though, as you will find yourself laughing at the various misspellings and plot holes. Basically, this is the story: Alta Hex Strife is an "emo" pony that nobody likes. So, after getting kicked out of her last town (for being an emo, duh), she decides to live in PonyVille. But, this isn't the PonyVille you all know and love... as everypony (the mane 6) are emo's that love Justin Biber and Katy Perry... eeyup....
@Aqueous No, whatever you do, don't hold back. Link wil stay till tomorrow btw. Goodnight,
@SquiggleTail Thanks for the compliment. Learnig from horrible fics is not a bad idea. Poor Rainbow Factory, is not that good but is not as bad as the other one. I read that emo thing when you mentioned it the first time. Just horrid bleh . Awesome comic, yes the new figures are great, I hope they get here, but I doubt so , we don't have Toys R Us. Checking your site.
Hey guys, I have begun a chapter 3 and performed some edits in previous chapters. I cannot find @Aqueous' posts anymore though...
If you want to add me on 3DS, my FC is in the signature, along with my fanfic. Chapter 3 happens in a dream, a flashback but will not reveal everything about Horus, just some details.
@Squiggletail: Yay, return of the TU comic! And project Revolver's been updated? Imma go check that out.
I thought today's episode was pretty good. The song the song was better than I thought it would be when it started. Also, Sweetie Belle was awesome in this episode. [youtube:PrzAtvpOlLA]
EDIT: Whoa, looks like I unintentionally overloaded the post with s.
I'm pretty okay.
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