Sorry I haven't been around at all today, been really busy doing things with my family and reading @twilight_Crows fanfic.
@JarvanZheitk Sorry I'm late but Happy Birthday. Hope you had a great day.
@Twilight_Crow I have read the first three chapters. I like how you portrayed the conflict between Luna and Celestia, and their thoughts on it during that hard time. I'll be moving on to the 4th chapter tonight, so I may have something tomorrow.
@Aqueous I'll be taking your advice and skipping it. Goodnight.
@General_SquiggleTail The reason I know is, because I was following this thread for a while before I watched the show and joined nintendolife.
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@SquiggleTail - One, I don't travel. Two, it seems very unlikely that there is such a flight and if so why did I never hear of it before. At Squiggles I'm sorry, your going to be a little for particular, as there is alot in the fan fic, also I may have used some sarcasm and not noticed while trying not to go into it too deeply as the fan fic is not really umm, E for everypony.
@Applejacklove - Good plan, as there is also wonderfully high amounts of swearing in her notes. Goodnight.
@SquiggleTail Hey, I finally talked with Phoenix, she's been busy but she is interested on the project. If you let me give her your email, she'll contact you a some point next week.
@Applejacklove Glad you like it, and thanks for the halp on chapter 4.
@Aqueous Hope you read this, sorry but it is impossible to read Google docs on anything but a computer . No worries I'm going to put it on fimfiction without publishing it.
OK, for anypony who wants to read, here is chapter four of my story Within the Night Bringers: http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/33039 password: ponyponypony Please post your opinions.
Well, interviewing tomorrow for a full time job I've been after for a while! Not really crazy about giving up more of what free time I have. The upside is moar money for ponies (like this fall's batch) and Wii U later. Downside is no time to enjoy them. Life is wierd/sucky, LOL. Oh yeah, PONIES, PONIES, PONIES.
Workin' for a livin'!
Then after a while it'll be "take this job and shove it", LOL.
@NintendoFan_27 Thank you. That Twilight Sparkle avatar was too cute to pass up! As anypony who's been here a long time will tell you, I used to change avatars between the Mane 6 all the time (of course it usually being my Fluttershy ), but I've gotten lazy with avatar changing LOL.
The fan fiction that has been floating around the last posts (you know, the poorly written, emo one) is so bad i firstly tought it was done by a chinese-native speaker. Then i saw the generous amount of swearing and nonsense. My opinion fell very low, then, and i stopped the reading right there.
Wow...just red part of that weird belieber/emo fanfic....I can do a better self-insert. And believe me, i am the opposite from talented at writing, but at least i think i have better grammar and don't mess with source material like that...how did bieber come in "ponyvil" and....**** a pegasus? Oh and apperently there is a sequel...wut.
@Everypony Okay, okay, okay... I would like to apologize to everypony that read that god-awful fan fic. I will mourn the loss of your poor brain cells. Like I said before, my next recommendation will be something that's bad, but isn't terrible. The whole point of "SquiggleTail's Fan Fiction Theater" is to learn from the author's mistakes. Although, eventually, me and my brother will do very "dramatic" readings of these fan-fics, thus the title "Fan Fiction Theater".
@FluttershyGuy Hope everything goes well for you. It's a vicious cycle I know.
@AlbertoC I was racing too. I was Andy, but now I changed my mii so everypony will know it's me. Good racing btw.
@Twilight_Crow I haven't started on the chapter tonight, I was a bit worn out, but I'm going to start in the morning. Your welcome, I hope I do well for you.
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@CorperalPegasus - I'm sure you could write an awesome fic in German...
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@buob my first language is dutch but i get what you mean. Still, the biggest problem is, i suck at writing, but i might try a self-insert that is a parody of other self-inserts because some of them are just begging for it. Yesterday for example i red a okay fanfic but half of it was this guy called Floris explaining to Twilight Sparkle what the internet, an iPod Touch, the Infamous Cupcakes fanfic and an iMac was. Will parody that one definetly. Just don't expect a decent story. Lol. At least i tried.
@CorporalPegasus, Originally, "STFFT" was going to be known as "SquiggleTail's Fanfiception", where I was going to make fun of certain bad fan fics. I'm very interested to see what you come up with.
@Applejacklove - Okay, night! Oh, and I just realized that I didn't even see the post regarding Trixie stealing from Zecora until just now. Oops, good thing I checked. I'll come up with something today or tomorrow.
@CorporalPegasus - Oh, sorry. That's what I get for assuming. Parody fics are always awesome, and from the looks of it, you've got what you want to parody already. And we're always here to help if you need any.
Derpy looked up to the basilisks and closed her eyes, then reopening them. "I was wrong... my friends don't really care how much I screw up... they don't care what damage I cause... they accept me for who I am, faults and all... that makes them the best friends ever..." she realized.
The basilisks, however, were unmoved for the most part. "Friends don't hurt their friends. You would go back to them only to be hurt again?" the leader asked.
Derpy shook her head. "No, no, no, you don't understand. Even the best of friends can get angry with one another sometimes. Look at Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. Pinkie Pie's driven Rainbow Dash nuts more times than I can count... and I can count pretty high! But they accept one another. They all do. I guess I forgot that somewhere..." she said.
The rebellious basilisk was ready to strike. "You are a fool, foal! You deserve your stony fate!" he screeched, preparing to open his eye until the lead basilisk growled in his direction.
"Open those eyes and you will answer to me!" the leader roared. His minion retreated. The leader looked towards Derpy. "Young one... did you know that we used to be friends with the population of Ponyville? Then, one day, there was a rash of crimes committed and my kind were blamed. We fought with the ponies, turning them to stone, one by one. But then, Princess Celestia descended upon us and broke up the fighting. She tried to help us find peace, but were were so hurt that our pony friends turned their backs on us that we would leave them."
"That sounds almost exactly like me..." Derpy realized.
"Exactly. Princess Celestia was saddened, but she had a plan. She gave us the mountain range you found us as my people's living grounds. We were originally from the Everfree Forest, but being so close to Ponyville felt like a... bad idea. Perhaps she wanted Ponyville in our view so that we may grow homesick and try to make up with our former friends. Sadly, my father's time had passed, but I will not succumb to stubbornness. Young one... what did you say your name was?" the leader asked.
"Derpy!"
"Derpy. You helped us realize that it's useless to run away from those we once called friend... that is not what friends do..." the leader began, than turning to Twilight Sparkle and the others. "Would you arrange an audience with the mayor for us? In the meantime, my followers will bring the ponies who recently went missing in our mountains for you. As well as a peace offering," he smiled.
Derpy couldn't believe her ears. Her own experiences with her friends, her self-imposed exile, her realization... she just ended a feud that had been going on for hundreds of years!
@ZeroX: I read your fanfic, it's looking pretty good so far, can't wait for chapter 3. @Buob: You have a fanfic too? I'll add that to my reading list. @Twilight_Crow: Chapter 4's out for pre-reading? Sweet! Another thing to add to my reading list. Also, I have had no problems reading Google Docs through my iPhone, it works great. What device are you using?
Wow, all of a sudden I have a to-read list for fan fics. Never saw that one coming.
I'm pretty okay.
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