Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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@CorporalPegasus formally known as Private_Pegasus nope never seen it before, nor have I played any Phoenix Wright games, still I enjoyed it if only for Phoenix and I ound the second part, I don't think FluttershyGuy will like the plot development in it. Still I think Phoenix and the judge character made it worth it, even though the other voices got to me, though now I need to add it to the large pile of Fan-Fiction that I'm trying to get through that everypony keeps posting, keep it up everypony.
Here's part 2 :
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@Sylverstone - thank you and it's worse then watching an LK panel, at least I'll see those later without the screaming fans. Oh well, still enjoyed it, have fun at the next one.

@albc5023 - I'll start writing down what was said for you, but it might take sometime, I got several things left to do both tonight and tomorrow, but it shall be done, eventually

@FlutteryshyGuy - The Legend of Groose?! BEST GAME EVER! It's too bad you can't be here much, I read everything I missed before originally posting and have gone back through a couple times to find things and you have given something here I think and I hope you keep posting. I must swapnote you soon.

@PhoenixCake - I take it your not bothered by me looking through then? Also where are you in Canada, if your close I might just find you. That least that would make 3 bronies I've met in person, though they are girls.... do other males watch this, I've only ever seen them online. I like what you and Twilight_Crow have been working on, in the future I'll address both of you when I mention anything now that I know you are the other pony behind Twilight_Crow's work, great job. Later though I'll have to try my dark powers against your own.

@Destroyer64 - You have half a year, don't panic yet

@SquiggleTail I think you'll like this more then any other brony, go to google, click images, then type in one of the following two things either MLP SquigglTail or MLP nintedolife, I think you'll like what you come a cross.

@Twilight_Crow - Your welcome, I've got a few hours everyday, that I keep for myself, I've been giving those up and enjoying it as it gives me the ability to help a great story teller (as you don't seem to like being called a writer (yet)), I make lots of mistakes myself and that's likely why I can find them. If you ever want the English word list just say, they are mostly words that aren't even heard of any more or maybe I'll just slip a few in every now and then.

The rephrasing (good term for it), takes alot of time for me, as I'm trying to make sure I do have it in the right context for the story, make sure it's likely what's happening, consider anything I might have missed around that point to make it unneeded and then of course think what is likely to work for you and try not to draw on my own style, when typing it. Glad you'll never give up your own or let mine twist it. I'm always sure I think I know what's going on but if I misread it or if the wording does not show off what you want and I'm mistaking what is meant, when I attempt it. I'll keep it up since you like it but I've been torn every time and have thought deeply before mentioning each one and send a long time afterwards till you respond stuck on them. If you want I can describe what any part suggests that your not sure on, as the whole thing is skilled and well put together enough for me to see the whole thing as I read, I have to focus to see words and not get caught back up in the writing and just go with it and miss everything again as I enjoy myself reading.

Now for symbolism, I use to not see it but the two courses of AP English I took have made me find it and think so deeply about it, I can't get away without seeing it if any possible symbolism gets into any writing work. Sometimes it made sense, like candles throughout a book meaning hope when lit and having them in some situations where the character or characters were hopeful and even dramatically towards the end have him extinguish "hope" by putting out a candle after it got lit after a mine (might have been a bomb but I don't care, I'm on a rant) blew up near by and and other symbolism came up in the same book (It's called "The Wars", if your curious, it's not bad but the symbolism is bothering me right now), the other was horses being freedom (Horses, fitting for a form on ponies) and throughout the whole book of freedom was lost or if freedom had died guess what a horse died, and horses were everywhere throughout that book because they related to his freedom. It was so over used I hated horses and wanted them all to die by the end and it was so satisfying in a sick way when towards the end of the book, he was killing horses, I was actually happy to read deaths, of innocent lives, so sickly satisfying, as it goes against who I am, but watching the character snap was enjoyable in a sick way after all he put up with. Though more often then not symbolism is (add foul word that does not exist in Equstria here) because it DOES NOT EXIST, the number of time symbolism was were I never saw any was frustrating writing about something that does not have meaning as if it did was not my favourite task, particularly when most of the books were just readable at best. I despised it more so when to complete work I had to contrive symbolism out of nothing, Needless to say I find it crop up all over the place now and it's normally it's at least believable, but it makes me think of every possibility, not much of a choice either and it's annoying when there is none and likely was never intended in the first place. You however made a really good piece of one as it makes a great reference not to a concept that is overly used to where you want something to die or so rarely used that you wonder was it even worth mentioning as we next to never see it and it rarely means anything anyways. Yours references part of the writing and though I don't know which part it fits, I don't think anyone is scratching their head as much as me just because I've been trained to find it, discuss it and then use it in a thesis paper on the given novel (alot). Intentional or not, you made a good piece of symbolism, just be careful with it, I've seen as pointed above, so many over used and killed, don't fear using it to little, having it torment the princess a bit or explaining it later would likely be fine and would likely help ponies understand what Nightmare Moon meant. I likely over analysed it and might still be doing so if I did not feel tried after checking through and knowing I had an early morning ahead.

Your the second writer I've been able to discuss their work with at great length and enjoy that. The other is my closest friend, they are not brony (I might see about that), nor are they here on nintedolife. I'll send you a note on deviantart to them if your curious, their writing is mostly sick and twisted though, were as the poems are light hearted or humorous. You might like them if you like Edgar Allan Poe, I hope you know French though, they are a master of the word in English and have started to practice their French in writing form for a few pieces, sadly you may never get the full effect of his work, when he reads them, there is a whole new life to them that makes them better, one you could never find by reading as he stresses and pauses as one could not read and I have tried. I need to check his gallery though as there is much a missed.

I still await for when you and Phoenixcake say it's time and after I've went through everything and given you sometime I think I'll go again, to see if I missed anything and if anything new popped up. Hope to race you again soon, writing master, Twilight_Crow.