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Aqueous

My reaction to the pokemon black/white 2
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AlbertoC

Aqueous: Where did you find that image? From failblog, but from where? I'm wondering if it is a reaction image to a fail, or something else?

3DS FC: 4554 - 0221 - 1785

Syrup

OKAY! After being gone almost all day, it's time for something new! I would now like to call this new segment "@RevolverFlare presents: The Good, The Bad and The Ugly". Every week, I'll pick three different fan fic's; One that I recommend because it's good (good story and writing), one that I recommend because it's bad (so you can learn from its mistakes) and finally, one that I recommend because it's down right ugly (horrible writing and an insult to the English language). Shall we get started?

@RevolverFlare presents! The Good, The Bad and The Ugly!
This weeks picks are:
The Good:
Progress, by Andrew J. Talon
Description: A thousand years is quite the generation gap, so Princess Luna decides she has to get with the times. However, this isn't quite as easy as she thinks it will be...
Review: A very funny fan fic starting everypony's favorite princess: Luna! After being imprisoned in the moon for a thousand years, Luna has really fallen behind on various things, such as technology and the way people interact. The writing is great, the author really captured the characters personalities.
8 Applejack's out of 10

The Bad:
Stopping the NightMare cult by superfunnelc
Description: when bronies Jack and Scott step out of a portal and into equestria they will find love, adventure, action, puzzles, parties, and CAKE! Note: Chapters will get better the farther you go along please do not stop reading based on the 1st chapter
Review: This one's pretty bad, in the sense that the concept is over done and cliche. The plot revolves around two humans, Jack and Scott, who find a portal to the magical land of Equestria in their fridge. After stepping through the portal, they find that they are now ponies. BLAH, BLAH, BLAH. It turns out they're actually Celestia's kids, and that they were in fact ponies their whole lives.
This one isn't horrible. The idea of switching the character's point of view is pretty neat, and the writer does make very character sound like themselves. BUT! It's those little things that stop this story from being average. Like, the constant references to the show, the semi-simplistic writing, the characters are Mary Sue's, or the fact that (spoiler) Ditzy got raped(spoiler). Other than that, this story has potential of being good, and I do recommend that you guys read past the first 3 chapters, as it does start to get better.
6 Applejack's out 10

The Ugly:
da nite dhat changd everythang by Im nut ok i Promiss
Description: A story about a pony who has to deal with soceity and all the other depressing things in her life. I am going to try writing a story for my little pony because the show rocks as much as GC...
Review:
This is the single greatest thing that I have ever read in my life! Every other fan fic pales in comparison to this wonderful masterpiece! Bravo! The author nailed everypony's personality to a tee! The writing is so profound! It truly touched my soul, and for that, I would like to thank the author.
I give this story 10 APPLEJACK'S OUT OF 10!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....
BLARGGGGH....
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH.....

Woah, is this one bad!
In the words of @CorporalPegasus:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
-Phew-
Believe me, forever in black is great after reading this weeks abomination!

0 Applejack's out of 10. READER BEWARE! Well, actually, if you feel like laughing, then I do recommend it. Other than that, avoid this story like the plague!

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Syrup

Howdy!
Revolver grabs a muffin, and takes a bite. Instantly his taste buds are bombarded with an unexplainable taste. He is suddenly in a euphoric state. After a couple of seconds he says...
WOAH! These are amazing! Did you make these?

[Edited by Syrup]

Lunapplebloom

Nice racing earlier everypony.

Good Going @Nibelilt. I'm glad you won.

@ZeroX Interesting about those Pokemon games, though why they are still making them for last generation hardware is still beyond me. (I let the first one slide because it came just before the 3DS came out, but this is inexcusable.)

@SupremeRulerofBlaBla Wow, three of them this time. I guess I'll take a look. Also, I've been wondering if I should keep calling you what I usually do or if you would prefer your new username?

@AlbetoC You have one to look at as well. I'll try to read it sometime.

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Like: Sonic, Yoshi, Link, and Samus
My Appleloggery and Youtube
PSN ID: sonicwildfire
Previously Applejacklove
Discostew: "I am the terror that trots in the night!...

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Twilight_Crow

Hello Everypony! I've been missing you all.

I have midterm exams next week, and I'm witting a report so... AAAAAAAH!
I'm glad there were no ponies today actually .

Can't read all those posts but I skimmed through them:
Ehem, I'm not a Derpy fan, but the fact they change her sucks. I hate when political correctness screws cartoons.
I manage to preorder The Friendship Express online thanks to a local DVD/CD retailer special service. yay me.

@ZeroX Totally loking forward to read your new version of T&D next weekend, good luck with it.

Ah there were a lot of RP, I feel so bad I can't actually participate atm , so...

Dear Subjects:
Your Princess is in another castle. Yep, I went on an important diplomatic mission.
If something bad happens, please call Twilight Sparkle she'll know what to do.

Your Royal Highness
Princess Celestia.

Pokemon B/W 2???? Well... I guess I'll get Black 2.

Great selection of fanfiction @RevolverFlare and @AlbertoC.
Progress is the most funny Luna fic ever. It intrduced the abacus into the fanon. I would give it a 10 just for that . Not fan of Loss but it is good. Gonna ignore the bad and ugly fics for a lack of time... what a sacrifice.

And time for my
== Fic Of the Week: ==
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6735/Equestria%27s-Twilight
This here is how you write the descent of a character. A Princess Twilight fic, with a great insight on time travel. A sad and fascinating experience so far.

As usual thanks for the content guys, couldn't check it all but I will, esporadically during the week.
See ya next weekend.

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"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor, Shall be lifted nevermore!"

"I'll just have to STOP. TIME!" - Twilight Sparkle

Twilight_Crow

@ZeroX LOL fixed.

"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor, Shall be lifted nevermore!"

"I'll just have to STOP. TIME!" - Twilight Sparkle

Aqueous

@Twilight_Crow - Avoir and good luck, but if your still around Revolver wants a word

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Twilight_Crow

@Aqueous Hi, Thank you. I'm still taking some minutes to check around the net.

@Revolver Yes?

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"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor, Shall be lifted nevermore!"

"I'll just have to STOP. TIME!" - Twilight Sparkle

Syrup

Greetings, @Twilight_Crow. This is a semi-personal question, but, I don't mind posting it here. As you may or may not know, I've recently updated the website with information on a new character. I wanted to ask you if you'd like to write his backstory. It's okay if you can't.

PONIES PONIES PONIES

Twilight_Crow

@RevolverFlare Hi. Is it the antagonist described on the first post of the Oh My God! thread?

I would love to, but it would have wait untill next weekend, after my exams, if it's ok with you. If you need it sooner I think can't.

Oh yeah... Ponies Ponies Ponies

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"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor, Shall be lifted nevermore!"

"I'll just have to STOP. TIME!" - Twilight Sparkle

TeeJay

@AlbertoC The dirty trick I was referring to was braking so you could wait for me to take flight on the way to the Saturn rings in Rainbow Road so you could hit me with that red shell you were holding. Devious yes. Genius yes. Unbelievably frustrating? YES.

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