Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

@Retron_on_theGo, lolwut, you mean this:
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Unfortunately no image I can find best fits the smile on my face.
But I digress; I believe Revolver has my email. Just ask him for it because I'd love to hear what you have to say.
I always love a polar difference of opinion.

You hear that Flare? Send AQ my g-mail address i you'd be so kind.

Also, I just remembered the other site. I'll try to keep it spiff (visit it more often)
There seems to be a lack of posts on Flare's too.

Ah well.

@RevolverFlare I cannot narrate the whole premise and my goal for Treason and Deception is to do like the Tales series; focus on the characters. I do believe Horus should be a natural alicorn. Lets move on.

Edit: The original plot had none of the two and involved shipping.

Focusing on the characters is fine, but if you're not going to delve deeply into the past, you cannot allure to it as much. As it will not have the same effect or, punch.

@Tare, Speaking of my site/project, how's the first chapter coming along?

@ZeroX, disregard my previous comments...

@Bothofyou The plot is still subject to change, but what you saw was a general outline.

@Tare - Really I check that back up about twice a week and I stock the main one at least 2 times everyday. You guys are really slow to post anything on them.
Once I have it we shall begin, though to be honest, I'm going to pick apart that little man as destructively as I can but I've already met people who like it. There is either spite or enjoyment from it. I've got an image of how serious I am but its old and weak for my skill, I'll look up a lovely angry Pinkie for you later, something frowning.

@Revolver - I can still see the apple. check your site, I made a comment

@Retro_on_theGo - Yes that is a good one isn't it? Most are like that.

@Everypony - Goodnight, but you know, its nice to see ponies from earlier in the forum back and commenting.

**Double-post**
Keeps RP going

Saevin; "I brought you to the spring of life, where master and I take a load off our shoulders and relax. We didn't land too far, although I don't know where Cloudsdale is at this point."

Pinkie's eyes suddenly snap open, and she springs up.
"Hey, Chubby! Hey, Spike! Hey Saevin! I haven't talked to you much, have I? GASP! We need to throw you and Horus a WELCOME PARTY! Well, maybe when we get back to Ponyville. Wait, where are we?"

I was also thinking about collecting this RP in a text document. It would be nice to preserve for ALL ETERNITY! MWAHAHA! _{Oh, um....}

"Quite frankly, I don't know... the spring of life is were alicorns like us come to ease their wounds. We find this place by instinct. They're so few of us already, and places like this have become so rare. Reminds me of Horus' home..."

In context; Horus' family was brutally murdered by an association who wanted "equality" and deliberately kills pegasi and unicorns. They take Horus in as a test subject and try to rid him of horn and wings. Instead, they end up engraving the dark Eyes inside of him, making him the King of Darkness (much better plot, I find they "equality' plots good and way too underrated"

After having to read about 5 pages of posts, I'm finally caught up. Phew.

The commotion was enough to snap Spike out of unconscousness. He opened his eyes and was immediately greeted with a sharp pain in the center of his forehead where he had smashed it into the ground upon impact earlier.
"Ohh...OW! My head...Where am I?"
Looking around, Spike noticed he was surrounded by a group of strange ponies and a creature he couldn't recall ever seeing before standing on two legs.
"Um....hi. I'm....um...erm, I don't really know... Well, could somepony tell me where I am and how I got here? Ow... "
He clutched his head. The throbbing pain in his skull was unbearable.

Surprisingly better than expected.
I'll try to show you something in a weeks time or so.

And can you send Aqueous my g-mail? I must know his opinion of Duddy Kravitz!

I just figured people stopped using it. As long as at least you two are, I'll be more active.

@Tare, I'm currently emailing @Aqueous and I'll be sure to include your email address. It's good to see that it's coming along nicely. I'll be posting my attempt at writing a chapter (possibly) this weekend.

Finally, you two wake up. I seriously thought that you guys were dead. I was contemplating eating you guys, but, luckily we were saved by Saevin.

Hah, that was hilarious.

Gives RevolverFlare a quizzical look
Who are you? Who's Saevin? What happened? Where are we?

Saevin: He may have lost his memories... Huh... So you're the "Spike" Twilight went out of her way to re... Nevermind.

Ha Ha, very funny, Spike. Now stop playing around, we need to get back on track and start searching for Derpy again.
Revovler got up, and dusted himself off