Topic: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

"Are you sure its safe in there? As for accident prone, your still a friend regardless."

Derpy looked around. "It... might be? And you may have noticed, but Cloudsdale ponies tend to be more judgmental. I think it's because the place is so high in the sky, and they tend to be high on themselves... it's why I envy Fluttershy, really... being able to go down to the ground as soon as she did..." she explained. She then picked up something she thought she lost forever and slipped it into her notebook. "Oh, well, this place is dusty and run down! Maybe if I wear a disguise, the diner will let us in?" she quickly suggested.

@Tare, why don't you join in on the RP? You could be my old friend from the academy or something. Yeah! That would make perfect sense! That would explain who I was sending a package to at the beginning of the RP.
@Tare & @Aqueous, I saw that video and was utterly disgusted, which is odd, since I usually like dark humor.
@ZeroX, my main grievance with your overall story is the premise. It seems really out of place, like something that would never happen in that universe. Plus, the idea of a human coming to Equestria and turning into a pony has been done to death; My next 3 "Bad" picks for "The Good, The Bad & The Ugly" are all about humans "magically" finding themselves in Equestria.

Revolver wakes up, but finds that everything is pitch black.
Where... Where am I?

"Maybe but why you don't think you'll be allowed in as you are?"

@Revolver - I like some of it but not all of it, then again I'm not a college humour fan.
Twilight_Crow posted a good one once, where Fluttershy becomes a human, I'm still watching that one and can grab the link if you'd like.
So Forever in Black would? ZeroX is writing darkly and made me shiver but its still a good piece, we've had other nasty pieces here and I'll go dig them up if you want.

I pretty much share Revolver's feelings about your story... But I am no pony fanfics connoisseur, sorry.
Oh so this is how Fluttershy felt that time.

@Revolver
Sure. I always figured I'd be a hoo-man anyway. Seeing as when the first RP started every character was taken.
I'll have to post later. I'm reading the Apprenticeship of Duddy Kravitz.

You should read it Aqueous, it's by a late Canadian author.

"Well... last time I was in there, I was doing a part-time job... and I accidentally spilled Princess Celestia's lunch over the ledge of the outdoor deck and to the ground below..." Derpy smiled innocently.

@RevolverFlare I can still change it, since I never mentioned so far in the book that he was human. Still, he will have the powers I the Eyes engreffes in him and Sawvon remains a Spiritual Guardian (an Angel) or else it'll mess up everything later.

"Oh. Well the Princess clearly didn't mind right?! Well, I could try to see if I have a spell for it, or we could see if there is anything clothing wise to hide you, maybe a dress? I think there is one in the basket back at the balloon."

@Tare - Oh, I read it, I read it alright and my thoughts aren't really "nice". I would not dare post them here. If you want I'll swapnote you my email, if you desire my ideas on it, I have some issues with Kravitz and his ethnics or should I say lack there of. I read it slightly over two years ago for A.P. English, it wasn't the years worse though, I found one title more terrible. Wait are you reading it for A.P. English?
Also I think Luna has been surrendered by ZeroX. To my knowledge Cheerilee is free and I'm not sure who else.

Oh, Max Giraldi, you silly brony!

If you're looking for characters to RP as, I think that pretty much every background pony who is not Derpy is free...

@Morpheel - Big Mac is gone

@Aqueous, Big Mac isn't a background character. He's more like a secondary character.

@RevolverFlare BTW: I will replace Horus from being a human to being a replicorn (An artificial alicorn who gained either wings/horn through secondary manners), his wings being the made from black magic. He will still have been tortured by some bad guys and saved by Saevin. This time around, it will differ, because Horus is revealed to be a replicorn given the powers of darkness as an experiment.

Now let's keep going with the RP everypony!

Why don't you just make him a naturally magical unicorn who likes to create magical wings whenever he needs to fly? If Twilight can, you can. Anyways, I think your idea would make a good manga instead.

Yeah, by background pony I had in mind the likes of BonBon, Heartstrings, Dr Whooves, etc.

THIS is the best pony-to-human fanart I've seen in my life.

@ZeroX, I don't mean to be rude, but it seems that you're missing the point of my grievance. You keep elaborating on your characters backstory, instead of acknowledging why I find your premise to be overused and out of place. Regardless, as long as your story doesn't take a nose dive into OC x (insert Character Here) Shipping territory, then you're alright.

@RelovlerFlare - Never sure with Big Mac he shows up at times and others not at and more often then not he's just part of the background, kind of like the mayor

@Morpheel, what a coincidence! I was just about to post an image by that artist. Here it is:

Whoever the person who did these is, I love his/her style.

@Morpheel,Her name is Kristin. Here's her tumblr. I really like how she draws Applejack.