Flandre- "I've been in the basement. For about 495 years."
Marisa- "That's sweet, I only get weekends off."
_
Marisa- It's so hot, I'm gonna die here.
Reimu- If you die, I'll feed your corpse to the birds.
Remilia- My, it'd be fine if you'd let me take care of tha...
I dislike celestial's, last one I met was makin earthquakes just because she was bored.
Ninja'd by a orange guy and DK >.<
@GuardianKing yes I did, to me it seamed to jump a little and can easily confused the reader I don't mind the chareter's personality she seamed interesting actually. But overall if it was a story I just happened on I wouldn't read more then the first chapter. I am Very picky with reading and writing story's.
Flandre- "I've been in the basement. For about 495 years."
Marisa- "That's sweet, I only get weekends off."
_
Marisa- It's so hot, I'm gonna die here.
Reimu- If you die, I'll feed your corpse to the birds.
Remilia- My, it'd be fine if you'd let me take care of tha...
@DawnOverALilly That's okay: I forgot to introduce you to the slew of characters I have. This is just an extract of sorts. That said, I guess I could do a better job of introducing them. (one of the two I actually turned into class for Creative Writing 1 )
@GamerZack7 Dude, that's not even the best dice roll ever. The best dice roll ever was when my friend played a Psionic Dusk Blade with tons of feats and modifiers. He sneak up on this lich and basically goes:
"So I have the attack of opportunity. Lemme see... 25D6 damage."
He takes out his entire bag of D6s and just pours them all over the table. With the added on bonuses, I think the final count was 174 damage or something.
Poyo. Poyo poyo. Poyo poyo.......poyo poyo. poyo(I don't know who you are but you have blue hair.
Oh and BTW: Shiny Pikachu's are slightly darker in their natural color. They're never blue.)
Was Mariobro4. No, I'm not taking off my backpack...it's important.
Poyo. Poyo poyo. Poyo poyo.......poyo poyo. poyo(I don't know who you are but you have blue hair.
Oh and BTW: Shiny Pikachu's are slightly darker in their natural color. They're never blue.)
Didn't I just capture you with my Master Ball. -_-
Who let you out?
I loved the first season of darker then black, a few parts made me tear up, the second season....not so much.
Flandre- "I've been in the basement. For about 495 years."
Marisa- "That's sweet, I only get weekends off."
_
Marisa- It's so hot, I'm gonna die here.
Reimu- If you die, I'll feed your corpse to the birds.
Remilia- My, it'd be fine if you'd let me take care of tha...
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