Topic: What do you think?

Hello NintendoLife forum members.
As many of you know, Nintendo's current situation on it's marketing is, let's just say, less than brilliant. I've wanted to do this for a while, make my own fan-trailer, and I want to know what you guys think so far. Mainly for timing, text and choice of clips/music. As the title of the video suggests, it IS unfinished. I'm in the middle of imputing X and Super Mario 3D World clips. Oh and ignore the super long shot of the gamepad at the end.
Let me know what you think Thanks
Apologies if I've put this on the wrong place in the forum or if I've broken a rule. I didn't have time to look up about them and I will happily transfer anything if I need to.

Link in my signature below

Please post your link in your signature. That's the place to advertise your site rather then make a thread.

And I forgot to mention, as well as imputing clips from those two games, I'm also putting in a small section of the gamepad in use (clips from Nintendo Land and LEGO City) as well as emphasising Miiverse (also noting that it's free)

This isn't a site though, it's a YouTube video which is why I'm concerned. I'm not really sure how it works.

Please feel free to advertise your YouTube channel and/or any pertinent video link(s) via your user signature. Thank you! :3