@Magi-There is a reference to zombies in both. In the fantasy one, they're not called zombies. In the on-going comedy/drama, henceforth to be referred to as Pierre, there is a direct reference to zombies. Hope that helps.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Sent confirmation emails to: Bro2dragons-- fantasy [already replied] Ravage-- Pierre Stevie-- fantasy ATTENTION: THIS EMAIL WOULD NOT WORK. I GOT AN ERROR MESSAGE. Castlehominid99-- either (Pierre) Toddr-- fantasy Terrangima-- fantasy first
So please reply, and you shall start receiving stuff! Don't forget to sub to this thread, too. And PhoenixSage, I still need your email.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
OK, mostly because someone made it with my account, and it was about people praising my awesomeness
Oh I see. This is mostly about reading my works. And only partially about praising my awesomeness.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
got the story. if i could say 2 things real quick. let me say first ('ve not yet started reading... i've got too much to do until tomorrow night, but) think about changing the title. it's long and cumbersome. you need something with a bit more flow... and something little more memorable. just a little suggestion, but form my experience, nobody will ever pick up a book in a bookstore that doesn't have an interesting title. a solid title will also catch the eye of publishers and help your story to actually get to said bookstore. second... i noticed your cover illustration is copyrighted 2006. is there any way you could post that image on here? i'd love to see it.
thanks again, and for the very helpful comments on my story.
“I am a brother to dragons and a companion to owls." Job:30:29
Why does the sudden title change look familiar.....? Oh, well, must be my imagination.
I did change the name with the parenthesis part added, so its more obvious what this thread is (currently) about. ALSO: I have now sent to Bro2dragons, Ravage, Stevie, Castlehominid99
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
got the story. if i could say 2 things real quick. let me say first ('ve not yet started reading... i've got too much to do until tomorrow night, but) think about changing the title. it's long and cumbersome. you need something with a bit more flow... and something little more memorable. just a little suggestion, but form my experience, nobody will ever pick up a book in a bookstore that doesn't have an interesting title. a solid title will also catch the eye of publishers and help your story to actually get to said bookstore. second... i noticed your cover illustration is copyrighted 2006. is there any way you could post that image on here? i'd love to see it.
thanks again, and for the very helpful comments on my story.
Title: "Demon-Hunters of the Compass" Not really too long. But I'm intriqued by the notion of calling it something simple, like "Compass," or something direct like that. Thanks for the idea. The image for the first book is pretty bleh, but you can see it here: http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/demon-hunters-of-the-co...
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Sorry to hear that, Terranigma. Send it when you can. Toddr-Got your confirmation and sent your attachment.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I've waited two weeks before starting to bug, but has anyone had the chance to crack open either file? Any feedback, etc. is welcome. Thanks.
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
I got really sick on Monday and am feeling better now so I should start reading soon, but I have a ton of homework now
Sean Aaron ~ "The secret is out: I'm really an American cat-girl." Q: How many physicists does it take to change a light bulb? A: Two, one to hold the light bulb, the other to rotate the universe.
@Terranigma-Seeing as each file sent out was multiple chapters/parts, did you mean you read the first chapter or all fo the first part/file? I just need to know when you need more! Glad you liked the beginning...
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
Okay, Terranigma, I'll send out the next part (chapters 4-6) to you by the end of this weekend.
To anyone else, let me know here when you have finished what I sent you. Of course, you have to talk a little about what you read first!
[21:14] pixelman: I blame fheblackdragon
[21:15] pixelman: That's not an f by the way, it's a fancy t.
[21:15] Objection: Tales of Graces "fancy t"
[21:15] Objection: Tinal Tantasy
[21:15] theblackdragon: lol OB
[21:15] pixelman: OB knows what he's asking about.
@O_B: i've started, but not gotten far enough to where i can really say a whole lot just yet. sorry. i've got so much going on with college right now, so i've just not had the time, but i told you i would read it, and i don't go back on my word.
“I am a brother to dragons and a companion to owls." Job:30:29
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