361KarakatoThu 30th Jan 2014 @FOREST_RANGER I really appreciate all that effort you put into your suggestions, thank you it really is helpful. As I said, I plan to go back to this at some point but for now I am preoccupied with a good number of works. And when I do plan to go back to real comic art, I'll do my own thing, some light hearted adventure to get me adjusted in proper pacing and scene captures. Maybe a quest for a certain cake perhaps? I also have to say that your comic page does look more effective in capturing the reader and again, I really appreciate the effort you put just to prove a point. Also, Just subbed the tutorial series you mentioned at the end, it will certainly help me in my skills. Edited on Thu 30th January, 2014 @ 15:11 by Karakato Fancy a Karrot Cake?Deviant Art ProfileTumblr PageMy BacklogThe Rest is Silence.