A dark yellowed mare came walking to the counter from a back room. Did you just want dark yellow mare? Yellowed means she is aged yellow like with teeth.
"Is here any more obivous you want to state?" I know there are 3 things here. First I think you want there not here. Second any more is one word. Lastly I think you want "that is obivous" or "obivous things" ( If you cnange is to are at the start it's an option). I think this the sentence you want "Is there anymore that is obivous you want to state?"
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@ZeroX - I'm pretty sure that one of the rules is that the fic cannot exist on fimfiction.net before you submit it. It must also start with that prompt. If it weren't for those two rules, I'd say go for it.
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@Tare Ok, I'll be interested in seeing it once it's done. I hope you win.
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About 8 hours till PONIES! And this is a Pinkie Pie episode. Everypony better get ready. I mean your bodies better be ready, because nopony knows what to expect out of Pinkie Pie! Just ask Rarity. One moment she hears "RARITYCATCHME", and the next she's coughing up cacti. Things are likely to get pretty hairy in this episode. Description on my program guide says, "Cranky Doodle Donkey refuses Pinkie Pie's friendship." You know how Pinkie gets when she feels dissed. The BLEEP hits the fan.
@Applejacklove I imagine Fluttershy's letter writing is flawless, and she's the bestest friend to everypony.
@Shadow100 Happy birthday, Angel! Can Fluttershy bake you a carrot cake for your birthday? Be careful, though, we don't want you go get a tummy ache!
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I'm pretty okay.
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