@ZeroX Ok, read your story, you are better at descrption than myself, and have a great imagination, but It needs a lot of polishing. Your pace is too fast, you didn't give me time to feel the emotions of the scenes. Rarity was too exagerated. Using the Cupcakes song, sorry I didnt like that, it felt forced, I mean "rumors"? How's that work? All of these are just my opinions of course, you are not half bad I assure you.
I can stand lots and lots of blood, and you are not going not even near the standard Grimmdark I read. instead of saying there are lots of pools of blood, you really should focus more on the injury itself, again just my opinion.
@Aqueous I'll be there tomorrow to race for an hour then .
"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor, Shall be lifted nevermore!"
"I'll just have to STOP. TIME!" - Twilight Sparkle
@Tare - I'm going very far off topic here but zombies on a starship, crashed in outer space that well.... I won't go into the plot, two of the main characters from the episodes have a part and it happens between 3-4. The thing is full of dark under tone, and what's coming next. But it is gross, beyond all I normally can handle. I could not help but read it because the author had done a brilliant job with the writing, tone and wow the story advanced. It was good but I regret the read as much as I enjoyed it, let's say one late night, poor sleep and I have the thing stuck in my head and I wish I was not remembering it on an inconsistent basis. Might compare to this Legend of "Cupcake", that I have not read.
@ZeroX - check your swapnote, his email is now yours to message him with.
@Twilight_Crow - See you then. Great tips for more gruesome writing. Oh joy!
Oh great, it's 20 to 1, okay I should get sleep, night everypony, I'll catch up on your messages to me in maybe 10 hours, I love my sleep. Free of thought and yet in complete control when things go airy.
Thanks for the advise you guys! I hadn't even known about drawing tablets until I Googled them just now. That's not happening. Moving on!
Thanks for the advise, Aqueous! Drawing my closed 3DS is a great idea! Mine is the Zelda one though, so it has all those complicated (yet totally sexy) gold etchings on it. I know I could just ignore them, but since they're there, I guess I could give drawing them a shot. And creating the outline first then the shading totally makes sense! Drawing seems much more within reach now. @Tare Thanks for the encouragement. Although I can't see your vid via 3DS, I'm guessing it's Gusteau from Rattattouie with his encouraging words "Anyone can cook." Also @Aqueous I've read Cupcakes. It was my first Grimdark gory story and...I honestly didn't think it was all that bad. (I know I've said it before) Maybe I just have a naturally high tolerance for reading such things?
@Tare - I'm going very far off topic here but zombies on a starship..
Oh. I always thought it was about some kind of elite squadron of Stormtroopers that do cool Stormtrooper things. I never thought I could have been that wrong.
Thanks for the advise you guys! I hadn't even known about drawing tablets until I Googled them just now. That's not happening. Moving on!
@Tare Thanks for the encouragement. Although I can't see your vid via 3DS, I'm guessing it's Gastau from Rattattouie with his encouraging words "Anyone can cook."
The TV scene is pretty inspiring, and has some valid points such as "You must try things that may not work" You should watch it when you have access to a compy.
Nopony important. Move along now; nothing to see here.
@Whoeveryouare (@Dark_TeeJay, I guess) Worry not, my Nameless/Faceless chum of mine! For, I, Captain General SquiggleTail, have emailed you the link to the website an hour ago!
All you fancy artists with your fancy drawings and stories.....am i the only brony who is more of a sports guy? I suck at drawing but Oh well, at least people liked my crayon Rainbow Dash. I suck even more at writing.
@Dark_TeeJay and @CorporalPegasus You both are not alone for I am a pathetic artist as well. Seriously I am. I pick up a pencil and all I can do is doodle something that loosely resembles what I am trying to draw. Maybe I just haven't done enough drawings yet, but at the moment I really suck. And @CorporalPegasus I would like to see your crayon drawing if it's not to much of a hassle.
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@Applejacklove - Your Big_Mac's brother? Well I never saw that coming.
@Aqueous I thought everypony on here knew. Big_Mac mentioned it a while back that we were bros., although it may have been a little more subtle. And I know you won't read this until you wake up but I just like saying it anyways, good night.
@Twilight_Crow I will read your stories tomorrow sometime, at the moment it is late and before I was doing some other things so I couldn't read it. But I will read it, and I will give you my feedback. You can count on it.
@Ultra128 Circles with letters in them each colored to fit the pony they are quoting. Awesome.
@AlbertoC Sorry You feel bad. I hope you are feeling much better when you read this.
Good night everypony. and good morning and afternoon to Ponies on the other side of the pond.
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@Dark-TeeJay - Glad I could be of help. I'm just going by how I was taught and trying to alter it based on what I know you have or could have. I have alot of tricks I can go through if you'd like as you build confidence. I really don't enjoy remembering horrific things and seeing as it would appear that what I've already got is for life, I don't feel like adding more to it.
@Tare - Oh there is Stromtroppers doing things don't worry about that but it's not the awesome kind of stuff your thinking of....
@Dark_TeeJay and @Squiggles - Is pourquoi the same in Spanish as in French because I could read the first word and figure out what you meant do to the use of amigo in cartoons?
@CorporalPegasus I love the colouring! That is so awesome!!! You should do more drawings! Is it drawn on canvas? Cause if so I didn't know you could use crayons on it. I'll have to try it some time with the canvas I have.
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