Thats great. Im going back in time, so I can ride a Nintendo taxi to a Nintendo love hotel, so I can clean it with a Nintendo vacuum cleaner, and afterwards eat some Nintendo instant noodles and play Nintendo card games!
Lieutenant Commander of the Lesbian Love Brigade
There can only be one, like in that foreign movie where there could only be one, and in the end there is only one dude left, because that was the point.
Hey, I brought a new chapter if you feel like reading!
Excellent job with that one, Luiginator. :thumbs-up:
Lieutenant Commander of the Lesbian Love Brigade
There can only be one, like in that foreign movie where there could only be one, and in the end there is only one dude left, because that was the point.
Phoenix, have you read my tale-in-progress yet? If so, what do you think of it?
Ah, forgot about that one. Don't take it personally; I'm a really forgetful person.
On to another topic! sound of rushing wind
Lieutenant Commander of the Lesbian Love Brigade
There can only be one, like in that foreign movie where there could only be one, and in the end there is only one dude left, because that was the point.
It's very good, Starboy, but you have a tendancy to be too overly specific. You want to make your writing descriptive and interesting, but adding too much useless detail can drag it down. Try to cut back on that and it should turn out excellent.
Man, so many people are trying to write something...I need to do that too, as practice for my classes...
Lieutenant Commander of the Lesbian Love Brigade
There can only be one, like in that foreign movie where there could only be one, and in the end there is only one dude left, because that was the point.
I guess I was trying to be like Rowling [rolling] and Sachar when starting my tale. I'll see what I can do about it.
Like I said, it's very good, but every piece of writing in the world can be improved in some way. Not that I'm the one to do it, far from it, but nothing's ever perfect.
Just keep working at it, man, and it should turn out excellent.
Lieutenant Commander of the Lesbian Love Brigade
There can only be one, like in that foreign movie where there could only be one, and in the end there is only one dude left, because that was the point.
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