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Topic: Fun With Haiku!

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RR529

Hokori wrote:

I Love Kawaii
A Japanese Girl Friend
I must have thee now!

Sorry to nitpick, but that second line is only six syllables.

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Auracle

Hokori wrote:

I Love Kawaii
A Japanese Lady Friend
I must have thee now!

I fixed the error
That Hokori made. It should
Be much better now.

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

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Hokori

True_Hero wrote:

Hokori wrote:

I Love Kawaii
A Japanese Lady Friend
I must have thee now!

I fixed the error
That Hokori made. It should
Be much better now.

?? girl has 2 ??? I keep clapping and counting 2??? gir L??? Right??

Digitaloggery
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niconico community is full of kawaii!
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Happy_Mask

Oh no, a poem
Such things disagree with me
My goodness, I suck.

Edited on by Happy_Mask

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Hokori

I hope I can think of a really romantic one to say to my GF when I actually get one, something that'll make Her heart blossom, oh and it must be in Japanese!

Digitaloggery
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Wonder_Ideal

@Happy_Mask
Your Haiku is great
But the first line has one too
Many syllables

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Auracle

Hokori wrote:

I hope to create
Haikus that are romantic
For my future girl.

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

Nintendo Network ID: True_Hero

RR529

The battle now closed
Brave samurai cleans with care
Blade shimmers in light

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Auracle

I just ate some cake.
It was very delicious.
I am very full.

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

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Drawdler

Isn't the plural
For the word haiku simply
Haiku without "s"?


Spooky Swamp is
In the Forgotten Worlds and
Has lots of haiku


Nintendo is all
Mario, Zelda, Metroid
Oh look, distraction

Edited on by Drawdler

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Auracle

@Nibelilt
I believe you are
Correct. Haiku plural is
Haiku. I fixed it.

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

Nintendo Network ID: True_Hero

Wonder_Ideal

The Backloggery
Is a record book for the
Games we are playing

Mesaloggery
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I believe that once one has spotted a UFO it becomes an IFO(Identified Flying Object) as you have identified it then as being unidentified. [email protected]

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The_Fox

My prospects are bleak
I can not sing, dance or act
Looks like porn for me!

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Bulbousaur

Deadpool is funny
He has numerous weapons
Get ready for pain

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Auracle

bezerker99 wrote:

Oh, for the longest
Time I read the topic as
"Fun With Waifus!" Oh!

Edited on by Auracle

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

Nintendo Network ID: True_Hero

Auracle

There is always time
For a little Haiku. Do
not forget these words.

I foresee what you'll do there.
-The truth is incontrovertible, malice may attack it, ignorance may deride it, but in the end; there it is. ~Winston Churchill

Nintendo Network ID: True_Hero

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